Back and forth
shit upon shit
we don’t seem to realize
shit will sink
even those floaters
Time has come…
what we need…
is a real good…
flush!
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Author:
James Michael (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 16th, 2023 00:13
- Comment from author about the poem: Shoulda covered your eyes at the title kiddos! No real violence occurred from my inspiration writing this one. Bullshit sinks the best!
- Category: Humor
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I understand and relate, dear poet
but sadly, I fear most people
will interpret your words
as a championing of that fatalistic
nihilism
that looming plague of modernity
sucking what little
we have of life, to cherish n enjoy
..
(but yes, bullshit sinks the best
its just, that it takes time for us
to realise
the sheer abundance of bullshit
all around us)
Always open for interpretation. It could be sociopolitical, concerning what that shit head Trump is doing (I’ll never know the actual truth).
For me, it’s the words we say to each other in the heat of an argument, when in reality we actually love one another.
Why does it always hit the fan? loll
Because, a great fan has sharp blades! Just gotta take off that protective shield!
I'm not getting out me fan in any summer heat! I will have to roast. Better than being hit by ..... (it rhymes)!
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Such an emphatically written simile here James, with human endeavour, on an industrial scale, the world is like a toilet, and I agree, a long awaited flush is in order, to hopefully make the way clearer, and the air smell a bit more bearable.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
Hopefully our society won’t choke on its vomit!
Thanks for visiting my toilet! I am wellish, we all need a good rant from time to time.
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