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Love-Me-Softly

Today you let me drive!

And even though I'm new
You had to criticize 
Everything I do
I'm doing my best
Far better than the rest
But like with everything I do
Unless I'm just like you
I'll never be correct
Unless what I do is perfect
  • Author: Love-Me-Softly (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 19th, 2023 10:05
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Parisab

    It’s probably not your driving, but a reaction to their fear and anxiety-your poem displays hurt feelings in such a pure way-thanks for sharing…We’ll all gain more confidence with practice of life challenges and poetry.



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