It goes down easier with a rhyme when you know you're not right!
So hold your head proud and pretend, real change never happens overnight!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Yes I've been wrong but found a new song! Keep up the write my friends!
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Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer calories... yes, the healing power of that little trick... our writing teachers warned us it was just a trick, a sing-song novelty... but it's really a proper incantation to heal, amuse, sober, or just plain seduce the listener!
Did I do that! Lol always appreciate your time and my food for thought brought less calories too
Dear Dan,
“real change never happens overnight”…
so true!
Your words today are very inspirational.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura 🌻
Bless you my dear friend! So good to see your name, and yes as I try to break my patterns of a lifetime I know what this won't be like a flick of a switch!
I'll take this interaction as a sign to keep pretending until I'm there!
Always a pleasure and take care
🤗🙏🏻
Great vibes here, positive and hopeful. ❤️
Got to be found at some point! Lol thank you kindly
On the up and up Dan
Can't fail with your attitude
Inspiring
I'll forever keep trying my friend. Each day is a test!
Always appreciate you time
Much peace and respect
All been said above , Dan. Home truth unable to be denied.
Some at the dog park today would disagree but it just gave me some more thoughts put down....
Always a pleasure
Thank you kindly
Much peace and respect
Depth over distance
legacy of steadfast over shortcuts
our wrong's pathing our destinies
hold on, wait
that lonesome, won't be around
for too long
although we may be too earnest, it's ok
although we may too timid, that's fine
although we may be too young at 80, that's just us
that's life
so hold on, fight strong
let your heart shine bright n bold
those smiles in your life, reward them
with your wings of hope and resolve
depth over distance
lament's as our afterthought's
exclamations in our eyes, we
survive
deep into those tunnels of life
we're still alight with aliveness
knowing, in each step
we imbue everything we have
find meaning, in our potholes
of life
depth over distance
worth over value
we'll trail a blaze
for those like minded
who realise
there's more to life than taglines
and price points
we'll be the ones who recognise
empathy and love
in each breath of life...
testify!
(what a fck'ng song
grabbed me and shook loose these words
from depths, I hide from myself
thank you! Brother
what an inspirational offering)
i read and learn, wise Poet
.... you won't hear this much from me but Dude! Fk love you... that song came on while listening to someone's podcast about he's ADHD and the abuse he went through as a child and how much music help him as it did me get the a very similar path.
It literally got to me within seconds and I cried 2 or 3 times all the way through!
Thanks with out end to be able to want to go to those depths, your words your energy is truly preciously priceless!
Hi Dan )) some people find it difficult to admit when their in the wrong … don’t they . A nice writing ) and yes real change doesn’t happen overnight ..
Guess we have to be lighthearted about things sometimes when things feel a bit difficult
It's definitely a fine line between being wrong and someone making feel their mind of wrong is yours!
I definitely need to be more lighthearted in my desire to change my ways.
Glad you like to song too. Blow me way when I heard it!
Take care my friend
Don’t think Ive heard of that song thanks for sharing
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