Goes down easier with a rhyme

Poetic Dan

It goes down easier with a rhyme when you know you're not right!
So hold your head proud and pretend, real change never happens overnight!

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 22nd, 2023 01:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: Yes I've been wrong but found a new song! Keep up the write my friends!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, L. B. Mek.
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  • jarcher54

    Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer calories... yes, the healing power of that little trick... our writing teachers warned us it was just a trick, a sing-song novelty... but it's really a proper incantation to heal, amuse, sober, or just plain seduce the listener!

    • Poetic Dan

      Did I do that! Lol always appreciate your time and my food for thought brought less calories too

    • Laura🌻

      Dear Dan,

      “real change never happens overnight”…
      so true!

      Your words today are very inspirational.

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

      Laura 🌻

      • Poetic Dan

        Bless you my dear friend! So good to see your name, and yes as I try to break my patterns of a lifetime I know what this won't be like a flick of a switch!

        I'll take this interaction as a sign to keep pretending until I'm there!
        Always a pleasure and take care

        • Laura🌻


        • Teddy.15

          Great vibes here, positive and hopeful. ❤️

          • Poetic Dan

            Got to be found at some point! Lol thank you kindly

          • peto

            On the up and up Dan
            Can't fail with your attitude

            • Poetic Dan

              I'll forever keep trying my friend. Each day is a test!
              Always appreciate you time
              Much peace and respect

            • Doggerel Dave

              All been said above , Dan. Home truth unable to be denied.

              • Poetic Dan

                Some at the dog park today would disagree but it just gave me some more thoughts put down....

                Always a pleasure
                Thank you kindly
                Much peace and respect

              • L. B. Mek

                Depth over distance
                legacy of steadfast over shortcuts
                our wrong's pathing our destinies
                hold on, wait
                that lonesome, won't be around
                for too long
                although we may be too earnest, it's ok
                although we may too timid, that's fine
                although we may be too young at 80, that's just us
                that's life
                so hold on, fight strong
                let your heart shine bright n bold
                those smiles in your life, reward them
                with your wings of hope and resolve
                depth over distance
                lament's as our afterthought's
                exclamations in our eyes, we
                deep into those tunnels of life
                we're still alight with aliveness
                knowing, in each step
                we imbue everything we have
                find meaning, in our potholes
                of life
                depth over distance
                worth over value
                we'll trail a blaze
                for those like minded
                who realise
                there's more to life than taglines
                and price points
                we'll be the ones who recognise
                empathy and love
                in each breath of life...
                (what a fck'ng song
                grabbed me and shook loose these words
                from depths, I hide from myself
                thank you! Brother
                what an inspirational offering)
                i read and learn, wise Poet

                • Poetic Dan

                  .... you won't hear this much from me but Dude! Fk love you... that song came on while listening to someone's podcast about he's ADHD and the abuse he went through as a child and how much music help him as it did me get the a very similar path.
                  It literally got to me within seconds and I cried 2 or 3 times all the way through!
                  Thanks with out end to be able to want to go to those depths, your words your energy is truly preciously priceless!

                • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

                  Hi Dan )) some people find it difficult to admit when their in the wrong … don’t they . A nice writing ) and yes real change doesn’t happen overnight ..

                  Guess we have to be lighthearted about things sometimes when things feel a bit difficult

                  • Poetic Dan

                    It's definitely a fine line between being wrong and someone making feel their mind of wrong is yours!

                    I definitely need to be more lighthearted in my desire to change my ways.

                    Glad you like to song too. Blow me way when I heard it!
                    Take care my friend

                  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

                    Don’t think Ive heard of that song thanks for sharing

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