A poem a day an oath we lay
To keep ourselves from fading away
This world full of work has no time to spare
For everyone here just wants a bigger share
Foolish we are to think this way
For everyone always had an equal share
Not of that paper but of emotions that flare
And make us feel, live and pair
The poems we read riles us up
It makes us drink an emotionful of cup
So start reading today if lost you are
And make yourself feel the wonders it jars.
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Author:
The Dreamer (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was my second poem on this path of poetry. I know it is full of mistakes but these mistakes are very dear to me so I will post it nonetheless. And yeah I know there is no word like "Emotionful" but I just felt like there should be one, so I created it? 😝 Hope you enjoy the poem of this newbie and provide some useful insights 😁.
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I love your comment as much as your poem. Creation is a wondrous thing to hold in one's hand in the nib of a pen or keys of a keyboard... more please!
Thank you! I'll be sure to keep em coming
I love it! Poetry can definitely be a release! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you! I know, it sure is the best way to let go of those hoard of thoughts.
So, I am one to use poetic licence at wanton, gifted one. Recently I wrote a piece and titled it "Creviced" which sounded right to me, till Google advised me no such word exists, and I relented (something I don't always do, especially if the word sounds correct to me) and amended the title. As a poet, I understand "emotionful". I even feel we should strive to understand each other's stretches of expression. Poetry itself is a language. This is a beautifully written piece, and a beautiful reminder, of just what poetry means to us, and the world. Kudos, gifted one.
Thank you very much! I can definitely relate to that 😂, yeah it sure is the most beautiful language i ever came across. Nah I am not really gifted I still got a long way to go, but one day I sure will reach that level. Just keep giving insights to this newbie 😁.
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