A union racing off the chart
He had her love her soul her heart
Their bodies Ached when forced apart
They met when very young
They took off on exotic flights
Saw sandy beaches northern lights
All set to put the world to rights
With every song they sung
The argument was lightning fast
They both exhumed each other's past
The end was nigh the dye was cast
As hate rolled off the tongue
Her bitterness said phone a friend
She'll test him to the brutal end
No currency or trust to spend
Confused and highly strung
Her bra strapped shoulder caught his eye
A mini skirt that can't deny
Suspended stocking silky thigh
The honey trap was sprung
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Author:
peto (
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Dear peto,
This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!
A great read for this reader.
Laura🌻
Thank you Laura
So good to see you
Your generosity moved me in the past
Have never forgotten it
A tremendous example to us all
extremely grateful
I’m humbled by your words.🙏🏻
To good to be great story telling.
Thank you very much
Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!
Far too kind Christina
Truly appreciate your encouragement and friendship
Thank you
Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤
Superb for me to read
Thank you Garth
Extremely grateful
That's definitely my ex wife!
Always a pleasure
Lol
Probably best comment I've ever had
Cheers big chap
A gent
I love the rhyming in this writing and the way it flows .. great read 🙂
Thank you Violet
I enjoyed this one also
Truly appreciate your support and time to comment
Yeah you are good at rhyming in your poems )) I hardly ever rhyme .. it’s just not something I think of trying ..
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