Distant

PoeticBiscuit

I watch you from afar,

But in reality-

I’m right beside you.

My hand grasping,

For your touch..

Only to feel the chill of the wind.

  • Author: PoeticBiscuit (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 22nd, 2023 16:29
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • David Wakeling

    This seems unfinished.The poor reader is left wondering who is talking to whom and what is the end result

  • L. B. Mek

    too near and our fingers get scorched
    too far and our frozen heart, gives up
    in between, exists
    that dream we aspire to realise
    in each new chapter of romance
    we take a leap of faith, to grasp..
    (inspirational resolve, a great read
    thanks for sharing)

    • PoeticBiscuit

      Could not have said it better myself L.B. Thanks for stopping by! 🙂

    • Poetic Dan

      That's like me in the same room as my loved ones and I'm too stressed to interact.

      Absolutely love your work.
      I do hope it brings you light

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      I like your poems ) good writing )



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