His lifeline cut off at the source
A first fence faller three mile course
A jedi knight without the force
He missed her velvet touch
A tarnished gemstone does not shine
The bitter taste of tonic wine
A banquet where the vultures dine
He missed her velvet touch
A power plant run low on gas
A chandelier of broken glass
She took away his back stage pass
He missed her velvet touch
A heart that lost it's rhythmic beat
He walks another dead end street
A raging fire still brings no heat
He missed her velvet touch
He excorcised love's haunting ghost
She said the words he cherished most
They raised a glass she made the toast
He felt her velvet touch
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Author:
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Oh, goodness they just keep getting better!! The last stanza is so rewarding, when she makes a toast and he feels her velvet touch! Another favorite!! Christina
Christina
You are very kind
Thanks a lot my friend
Extremely grateful
Oh "A chandelier of broken glass, She took away his back stage pass"....broken promises, lost love?
Really enjoyed this one!! Thank you for sharing!
You got me sussed Liz
thanks very much
Delighted to hear it was enjoyed
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