Summoning of a Gentle Spirit



Sometimes, I completely forget

about missing you


In a single moment

you come to the surface

of my lake


once again I drown.

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 26th, 2023 09:50
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 15
  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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  • orchidee

    Good write T.
    But you can forget about me. I'm never gentle to KP! She reminds me to go fishing - for trouts, old ones! heehee. I'm cruel. lol.

    • Teddy.15

      LOL I would never expect you to be, but remember one day she may come back to haunt you with her pout 😂

    • Neville

      Incredible ink Teddy .. be proud of this one my friend .. I know I would be and indeed, I am for you ... Neville

      • Teddy.15

        Today it's about my mum been gone 11 years today.. although would also pass for missing my London too. Thank you dear Nev, your words mean a lot 🤗

        • Neville

          ............................... 🌹x

        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

          Like the mention of the lake in this .. it’s sad tho .. when we feel so pained / grieved

          • Teddy.15

            Awe you felt it too dear Rose, missing someone that we can no longer see brings all type emotions we never heal we learn to live with the loss with the eventual memories of fond. Thank you dear friend. ❤️

            • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

              I can understand how difficult loss / grief ..can be . And I guess grief can appear in many ways .. aswell .

              I havn’t lost someone in a long time.. although I can feel grief over things .. and I know it’s never easy to feel so much sadness

            • LIZ

              The pain of loss doesn't really go away does it? Not completely....the memory is still there. We can forget for a second, learn to live with it, but life has a cruel way of reminding us, and taking us right back to that place. Thank you for sharing!

              • Teddy.15

                It sure does Liz, very nice to meet you, I've lost many very important people they were all young too, time and writing helps always. Thank you. ❤️

              • Laura🌻

                Dear Teddy,
                Losing our loved ones is painful.
                Cherishing the beautiful memories will ease our pain.
                My heart is with you.


                • Teddy.15

                  You have a very kind and beautiful soul my dear Laura, thank you. ❤️

                  • Laura🌻


                  • L. B. Mek

                    beautifully worded , dear Poetess
                    this is steeped in that relatable melancholy
                    where a heart's love refuses to cease
                    reaching and dreaming, even through
                    the annals of time, hoping for fate
                    to once again deliver us
                    to those we lost and yet can never
                    accept, as being gone
                    we can but yearn, remember
                    and hope...

                    • Teddy.15

                      ❤️ ah, thank you so much dear Mek. ❤️

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