A villanelle
Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle, Tantamount to yin and yang,
Like Desire and disrelish in personnel...
There is purely Right or wrong in the way to propel, In between everything is sham.
Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle .
Flipping a coin can show only two sequel Life abide within birth and death of man Like Desire and disrelish in personnel...
Good deeds and bad deeds of others to label, Amuse inhabitants of our clan.
Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle...
Thoughts black and white can be unfavourable, But are canoe and paddle in swamp
Like Desire and disrelish in personnel...
Life is path of flowers and gravel,
Essence of gravel gives modesty and flower gives arrogance.
Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle,
Like Desire and disrelish in personnel...
-Dewanshi
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Author:
dew (
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- Comment from author about the poem: 1. Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle - The opening line suggests that the beauty of simplicity like black and white shades can be found in the structure and repetition of a villanelle poem, which uses only two repeating rhymes and two refrains in the whole poem to convey its meaning. 2. Tantamount to yin and yang - This line compares the simplicity and contrast of a villanelle to the Chinese concept of yin and yang, which represents the opposing forces - negative and positive as black and white circle. 3. Like Desire and disrelish in personnel... - This line introduces the idea that conflicting desires and hatred both exist within individuals. 4. There is purely Right or wrong in the way to propel, - This line suggests that there are only two options - right or wrong - when it comes to making choices and moving forward in life. 5. In between everything is sham. - The line suggests that everything in between right or wrong is delusional and a trap that make things complex . 6. Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle - This line repeats the opening line to reinforce the idea that simplicity can be beautiful. 7. Flipping a coin can show only two sequel - This line uses the metaphor of flipping a coin to illustrate that there should be clearly two choices in life . 8. Life abide within birth and death of man - This line emphasizes again on the nature's teaching about 0 and 1 which is birth and death simultaneously. 9. Like Desire and disrelish in personnel... - This line repeats the earlier line to reinforce the idea of conflicting desires and hatred within individuals. 10. Good deeds and bad deeds of others to label, - This line introduces the idea of labeling others based on their good or bad deeds . 11. Amuse inhabitants of our clan. - This line suggests that the act of labeling others can be entertaining or amusing to those around us. 12. Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle... - This line repeats the opening line to reinforce the idea of the beauty of simplicity. 13. Thoughts black and white can be unfavourable, - This line suggests that seeing things in simple terms, as either good or bad, can have negative consequences. 14. But are canoe and paddle in swamp - This line introduces the metaphor of a canoe and paddle in a swamp to suggest that simplicity can be useful in navigating complex situations. 15. Like Desire and disrelish in personnel... - This line repeats the earlier line to reinforce the idea of conflicting desires and hatred within individuals two conflicting ideas in same individual. 16. Life is path of flowers and gravel, - This line introduces the idea that life is a journey with both positive and negative experiences. 17. Essence of gravel gives modesty and flower gives arrogance. - This line suggests that negative experiences can lead to empathetic personality and positive experiences can lead to arrogance. 18. Grace of monochrome resides in villanelle, - This line repeats the opening line to reinforce the idea of the beauty of simplicity. 19. Like Desire and disrelish in personnel - This line repeats the earlier line to reinforce the idea of conflicting desires and hatred within individuals.
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