A bird sings lightly

Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

A bird sings lightly in the blues 

she sings of kindness 

soft gentle tunes from a place of friendly feathers 

she sings lightly in the blues 

of kindness and cotton wool tunes 

 

a bird lives in balance in a sea of comfortable calm 

she sings her tune without a note of unkindness 

without a note of thunder 

singing her tune 


a kindness whispers in the sky 

we just have to listen 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 4th, 2023 01:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: Even when I feel sad I can sometimes find myself smiling at birds ..
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 10
  • User favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard.
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Comments9

  • Neville


    .. Me too .. & I do believe if one listens carefully enough and looks really hard, then one will find it in the end .. Neville

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      Thanks Neville ))

      Had two birds in the garden this morning a blackbird and another bird fluttering around each other ..

      I see the blackbird most days

      Appreciate the commentb

    • orchidee

      They will sing better than me screeching! lol.

    • Teddy.15

      A great sense of kindness and serenity in this ❤️

    • peto

      Best I've ever seen you flow
      Great writing Violet

    • Bella Shepard

      Dear friend you capture something very special in this poem. Just to watch these beautiful creatures bring a sence of tranquility. The dove is a symbol of peace for a good reason, and in their simplicity they may be wiser than us. This is a little gem, and a fav.

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        Thankyou for your kind words on my poem , 🙂 and sorry for the late reply . Yes , birds are so nice to watch .. their just beautiful

      • MendedFences27

        I believe there is a lot of wisdom we can learn from the creatures of this Earth. As you say, we just need to "listen." Birds in particular are certainly ones who speak out. They seem to know where the best place is for each purpose.
        This is a wonderful poem. I loved some of your phrasing (i.e. A bird sings lightly in the blues, friendly feathers, cotton wool tunes, a kindness whispers in the sky.) Sweet words that make the sadness disappear. _ Phil A.

        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

          Thanks so much for your lovely comment on my poem .. I appreciate that ) I’m glad it was enjoyed and yes we just need to listen .. I often think birds look friendly .. and gentle .. I see a lot of gentleness in nature

        • sorenbarrett

          So enjoyed your poem of nature and yes we just have to listen, whether to nature, or people or poems.

        • Garth Rakumakoe

          Reminds me of "Ella Hums The Blues" - An attractive work of art dear poet!

          • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

            Thanks for the lovely comment , 🙂

            I looked earlier at ‘Ella hums the blues ‘ and I could see a song she wrote about a bird

            Thanks for mentioning this

          • Nethra

            interesting words and beautiful poetry✨



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