Today is Independence Day and my neighbors will use fireworks.
I hope that they will be careful because people could get hurt.
Last night they used powerful fireworks that sounded like dynamite.
I could hear some children crying because of fright.
Many people are celebrating our independence today.
On July 4, 1776, independence was declared in the USA.
- Author: randyjohnson71 ( Offline)
- Published: July 4th, 2023 14:30
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments1
I admire that you portrayed various aspects of Independence Day, with not only the fireworks — the scare-factor of both setting them off and hearing them — but also the connections between the past, the present, and the future. Overall, your work engagingly conveyed the pride and excitement that July 4th is all about. Great job!
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