Grey cloud

Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

I see a grey cloud sighing
She’s in a Misty mood today
should I judge her
speak words that offer no bright colours her way

I see a cloud in grey shades
And maybe I wish to offer a helping hand, talk in rainbows
reach out with a hug

would you forget to consider clouds feelings, stand, ignore, judge ?
would you want to offer a helping hand
speak in rainbows
consider that cloud is important

I see a grey cloud in the sky
And I see sadness sighing
A place that needs more peaceful dove like smiles 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 7th, 2023 02:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes we feel judged , criticised , ignored , or others act a bit unfair . I have mental health problems ( dissociation ) and I have experienced ‘ sometimes ‘ others being unfair , a bit critical , judgemental .. and that feeling of being treated differently . When it does happen .. it never helps . Just wanted to try writing about it I’m not even sure if this poem is any good ? Any comments appreciated
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  • Views: 13
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments5

  • Teddy.15

    Beautiful dear Rose, but as you asked I would say that if you used your poetic pen to write about your feelings as a first person I think it would be truly marvelous. Sometimes I feel you use a mask to cover and protect yourself, here you are surrounded by other people like yourself who love expressing words in ways that make us feel safe I'm one of those such people so I would just reach out and say that if you ever wanted to write without a mask you would have a warm and welcome group. Sometimes I feel completely naked and scared after pressing the button to publish but what I have found is that it has help me in my personal experience and we are all human. ❤️.

  • peto

    I agree with Teddy
    Loved this one
    "Speak in rainbows " line is stunning
    Glad to see it twice

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      Thanks peto 🙂 I think too often some people can judge or be unfair towards someone who may actually be struggling wjth things .. and it never helps at all

      Glad you liked that line

      Yeah .. rainbows .. kindness compassion ..

      Appreciate your support

    • L. B. Mek

      loving the sentiment
      beautifully expressed and poetically
      affirmed by your choice wording
      thanks for sharing, dear Poet
      'I see a cloud in grey shades
      And maybe I wish to offer a helping hand, talk in rainbows
      reach out with a hug'
      just so resplendently humane

    • orchidee

      Good write V.

    • Neville



      I know its hard when it looks dark, but just remember, every cloud has a silver lining ... 💛

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        Thanks for the kind words , Neville )) some days are better than others .. tho I’m glad to have a nice and helpful therapist .

        Appreciate the comment



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