Marmalade Fingers

Neville

Marmalade Fingers

 

I now much prefer

marmalade

to strawberry jam ..

In simple terms,

I like the unexpected

sharpness of it

dancing on my tongue ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 8th, 2023 01:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: ... what else is a metaphor :)
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  • Christina8

    I've never had marmalade, so I'll take your word for it....sounds yummy!! C

    • Neville



      my word, you don't know what you're missing .. it's one of them things you just gotta suck it and see πŸ™‚

      • Christina8

        lol!!! πŸ™‚

      • Teddy.15

        Orange marmalade is the best thing ever I always have it in my home. Neville such a sweet little poem ❀️

        • Neville



          its certainly up there somewhere near the top of the list .. thanks Teddy ❀️

        • arqios

          It's tangy sweetness transports me back to Mum's morning 'appointment' at the kitchen table and of course ties back rather neatly to Paddington Bear.

          • Neville



            .................. ta for the thumbs up CB 🐻🐝🍊🧑

          • orchidee

            That reminds me, we're out of jam here. Shall we try marmalade next? I will mix it with arsenic in KP's sandwich. heehee.
            I'm horrible to her, but killing her off is going too far!

            • Neville



              I am very much stuck in my ways as far as traditional orange marmalade is concerned .. 🍊🐭

              • orchidee

                Thanks M. Well, not arsenic, maybe cat food! lol. She gets catty if I don't give her more money for botox. lol.

              • orchidee

                Orange, lemon, or even lime marmalade?!

              • Doggerel Dave

                My slowly grinding pedestrian brain could find no meta meaning here. For how could I temper my craving when the word β€˜Marmalade’ is presented to me?
                So I remain on the literal level and ask – Any tips? (My current infatuation is with a product contained in a long narrow jar which should be extracted with a specially designed porcelain spoon….)

                • Neville



                  thanks for diving in mate, much appreciated .. no tips I'm afraid except for maybe finger tips .. you should know by now a gent never tells .. I will say this tho, specially designed porcelain spoons are now collectors items .. if you've got one, look after it .. Neville

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Cheers Neville; thanks for the advice - mine, used daily, free gift from a friend who had TWO is cherished, used with care.

                  • MendedFences27

                    Make sure it's made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot Spanish dance on your tongue. A wonderful breakfast treat. I never met-a-4 I didn't like. - Phil A

                    • Neville



                      I came, I saw, I concur .. me neither my friend .. cheers Phil, N

                    • L. B. Mek

                      wisdom of taste, tongue to lips
                      flavours dance
                      with the passing of time we realise
                      sweetness in a purr or a lick
                      we just have to be open minded
                      to what we're offered in life..
                      (loving the wordplay, Hyung
                      a fun read
                      still, just glad you didn't take it
                      to marmite's levels
                      that's just irreversibly divisive
                      even as metaphor)
                      lol

                      • Neville



                        ................................... finger lickin good eh' .. so that is what a metaphor πŸ™‚



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