Today I saw my dears cry.
Today I’ve heard a person die,
But my soul felt nothing.
While they couldn’t believe this happening.
I saw myself today indifferent.
I knew this person, but act like I didn’t,
And it scares my dears, even me.
If it continues, buried aliveIi’ll be.
Not tryin to impress by words - I’m not a poet,
I’m writing these words to make my soul quiet,
I’m doing this to make my thoughts right.
“Whale & wasp” I’m not sure who am I.
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Author:
imalexx (
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- Comment from author about the poem: “Whale & Wasp” it’s a reference to Alice in Chains song. That day I’ve lost my good relative, but that was strange, I felt that day silent. No thoughts in head or heart. And then I issued this little poem.
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I never knew it was May today! lol.
We are living in matrix, u don’t understand lool
Matrix sound spooky to me. Maybe it's the time - you got 27 hours in your day - 26.05? lol.
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Good write to convey your shock, the day you lost your relative…
Thank u a lot!
Sometimes sorrow is belayed. Sometimes it comes unexpectedly. You know, now that you've made me think of it, Layne's death was almost quietly missed in my part of the world. But of all of the Seattle artists that have disappeared, I miss him the most. I appreciate your words. Keep writing.
I’m really upset with the fact that Layne’s death was discovered after two weeks. A lot of people known Layne, but there was no one to help him and so he died all alone. I really feel sorry for him and it tears me up. And yeah, I miss him a lot too! His voice is unforgettable.
Thank u a lot for sharing with me ur thoughts!
Oh no, I seen that 26.05 thingy again. Is that the time? How many hours in your day?! lol.
Well, we have 9 days in a week and 34 hours in a day. Its Monday here lol
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