I want to take you into my depths
Take you to a place where you disperse
Mystic as the sea, wild as the wind
Blinded you’ll come, into this land
Sense every wave, sense every hill
Feel every peak by my lips be still
Probe what’s hidden beneath this skin
A Godly collection of the joys within
Tonight we’ll sense, do as we intend
I’m a compass. A light. A force. I'm a Woman.
Our eyes now meet each other we see
As air you levitate, diving in deep
Sink in deeper is all I plead
The fruit of acumen together we eat
My pleasure is my right a totem of my patent
My sensuality, a gift beautiful and blatant
In my Eden ecdysis unfold
Together we’re exposed, body and soul
This garden's sweetness has no end
I’m a storm. Desire. Vigor. I’m A Woman.
Hedone, our pleasures and desires entity
The daughter of Eros, an avowed serenity
In me is Hedone the Goddess of enjoyment
On my throne, a Queen of the heavens
In me is Inanna, the Goddess of sex
Admires her vulva, gives pleasure with whips
As her, I want to bind all of my lovers
Relish every touch as they come closer.
In me is Oshun. Goddess of love
Fluid like the water glides our twosome.
Come in deeper, surrender to the feminine.
I’m strength. A human. My own. I'm a Woman
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Author:
Rebecca Langley Jensen (
Offline) - Published: July 10th, 2023 11:30
- Comment from author about the poem: This past year, I've found freedom in myself and my body. I've had an Eating Disorder for the past 8 years and was diagnosed with Quiet BPD last year. This year has been symbolic and impactful in my life, where I've finally treated my mental health, found comfort in my relationships, and most importantly found comfort in my relationship with myself and my body. I've stepped into womanhood with a clear vision of who I am, and who I'm growing into becoming. I want to acknowledge this by celebrating what it means to me to be a woman free in her own body, sexuality, and power, while bringing a contribution to some of the Goddesses from ancient Greek, Mesopotamian, and Yoruba Mythology. For luck - I'm publishing this on Aphra Behn's Birthday!!
- Category: Erotic
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Comments4
A stunning debut Rebecca
So glad to read of your recovery
Keep em coming
Looking forward to reading more from you
What a lovely message - thank you so much!!!
your ink is well spilt and impressively so .. enjoyed by me from beginning to end ..
congratulations too on your many recent achievement .. bravo and welcome to MPS where I sincerely hope you will feel comfortable and make many friends ..
All Good Things, Neville 🙂
Thank you so much Neville. 🙂
Means the world!!
A wonderful flowing read. So descriptive.
Thank you so much! 🙂
Such opulence of sensory write deserves only top marks... Compelling and quite attractive too... Well written, gifted one.
Thank you for these lovely words. 🙂
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