Bonkers!

orchidee



A poem not in any metre at all

And no tune to it either

No iambic pentameters or stuff like that

If I knew what they were!

 

Ohhh, I must stop this

Fido says so too!

 

Barging in on people's poems

Making daft, crass, idiotic comments

Me 3 brain cells have gone on holiday, you see

And I dunno when they'll be back

Probably never!

 

And who is this Fido?

He's all imaginary

But he'll bark fiercely at ya

If ya 'forget' to mark poems 18+

When they should be so marked

 

You knows Fido

You can humour him

Give him a bone or summat

He's very friendly really

He growls at KP at my command

That can't be bad! lol

 

Oh, 'The Wonderful Adventures of Orchi and KP'

You can buy the book

It's 400 pages -all blank!

Well, I've not had one good adventure

Since I married her

 

Or 'The Miserable Adventures of Orchi and KP'

It's 800 pages - crammed full of words!

 

Ya can beat an egg, some poets say

But ya can't beat some other things

I'm off to beat a couple now

And finish this rambling.......

 

'Where ya been on your ramble?' asks Fido!

Heehee.

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 11th, 2023 01:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: A batty and barmy interlude! A summary of my progress.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 11
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Comments5

  • Neville



    I see you've finally seen the light ..

    • orchidee

      heehee, thanks N.

    • Teddy.15

      LOL well your title is very apt Mr O kp would suffocate not just your love but your cat too. Stick with me lol 😂 ❤️

      • orchidee

        Yes Teddy. lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        I always liked the word bonkers. It has a particular feel to it, especially for people born in the colonies. British humor is the best, not too soggy. Nice write orchi,

        • orchidee

          Thanks SB.

        • arqios

          The current state is always the best to be expressed and the most authentic. No need to change a thing. The bonkery the better.

          • orchidee

            Thanks CB.

          • 2781

            I resemble those remarks...

            • orchidee

              Thanks 2781. lol.



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