Darkness has become my very light
I suppose even a flicker, better than nowt?
my belief of love
has sometimes been thrown into doubt
yet, I shall not give up this great fight
after all I am the poetess
and the ending of this poem
is mine to write
my blood is my ink
pulsating veins raging inside
happy ever after or tragedy and death?
I just can’t decide…
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Category: Love
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Comments5
Can I decide for you
Happy ever after all day long
"Nowt" I didn't expect from Italy
You are on fire right now
Superb
Oh peto, thank you so much, but did you know I was born under the same moon and starlight of Shakespeare! ❤️
That explains the talent then
LOL yeh lmao 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 so glad my scribbles entertain us both ❤️
But...we need darkness in order to see light! So either way you put it, love will always survive!!! "is mine to write, my blood is my ink pulsating veins raging inside"- YES!!! Well done!!!
lol ah so glad you have enjoyed this dear Liz ❤️ so fabulous to have another poetess who is related to my poems love is everything ❤️ thank you darling.
Always!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Teddy I love your first line "Darkness has become my very light" I also loved the doubt and indecision in the last line.
Dear Sorenbarrett Thank you very much, I love when I know what people like, thank you so much. love. 💖
How I missed this yesterday, I'll neva know .. You must have posted it late because I kept popping back just to check on your ink .. anyway, neva mind, I can now see clearly, it was ink well spilt ... ❤️ Neville
lol Oh I'm blushing, yes Nev. Thanks for your unconditional support. 💖
'after all I am the poetess'
of yes your are, truly
'The' Poetess, indeed!
(i'm allowed to trumpet
i'm invested!) lol
maybe indecision, is your decision
that artistic license to bamboozle
and delight
is all yours my friend, a reward
for these inking skills
you've so evidently cultivated
with zeal!
Oh Mek, you are such a wonderful man, thank you my darling friend, you know I'm just having fun. LoL 🤣 I appreciate your visits always dear friend. 💖
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