Seriously Wronged

Neville

Seriously Wronged

 

She gave him

all of her passwords

and also,

the freedom to roam ..

Then rubbed

each of his palms

with silver

and seriously thought,

that the bastard

would still more

than likely, come home ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2023 01:51
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Comments6

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Being nice to someone who’s unkind . I guess some people can be too kind to those who do not treat them nicely

    A good writing ))

    • Neville



      I can see we see things similarly V .. many serious thank you's my friend 🙂

    • orchidee

      I have to always rub KP's palms with silver - now she wants gold! lol. She never stops, of course.

      • Neville



        she sounds like my kinda gall 🙂

        • orchidee

          I will send her to you! You'll suffer terribly for seeing her though. You'll think it's an old trout at first. lol

        • Teddy.15

          Seems not just women are gold diggers lol this was like a scene from pirates of the Caribbean modern times. The shoe on the other foot for a change if you will excuse my pun. 💖

          • Neville



            Aaarh absolutely write me hearty ............... ❤️

          • Michaelpoet

            Good writing

            • Neville



              Thank you kindly kind sir .. Neville

            • Bella Shepard

              A lesson to be learned here dear friend. Sometimes we trust too much because we love and end up in disappointment, or with an empty bank acount.

              • Neville


                Hello my very dearest of Bella's .. how write you are my friend .. and if it were not so bloomin true I could have very easily had a hearty chuckle at the bank account issue you mention .. as it stands tho' I shall just sit here and grin inanely Neville 🙂

              • L. B. Mek

                I don't know, Hyung
                lately
                I've been thinking these lady's
                know exactly what they're doing
                it's the fools
                that fall for the thirsty silvers
                while surrendering their ticket
                to heaven on earth..
                (stats on single men and ladies
                is so off kilter
                I gotta think there's some design
                at play?
                but what do I know, lol)
                acute commentary and timely, a great shorty

                • Neville



                  love is such a splendid thing but oft confused with so many other things .. the inspiration underpinning so many scribbles .. thanks again brother M .. N



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