As midnight struck all hallows eve
With evil dripping off the sleeve
You caught me as I tried to leave
And help me with your stare
Spellbound in awe of your advance
The wink that beckoned me to dance
Destroyed my last remaining chance
Of side stepping your lair
Seated alongside causeless martyrs
Nibbling on my heart for starters
Guts adorn your legs as garters
Blood red knee length hair
A pain so dark it renders blind
Lassoed free spirit knotted mind
Each agony played on rewind
Broken beyond repair
You left as quickly as you came
The pawn sacrificed in your game
Will never truly be the same
Since meeting hell's au pair
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Author:
peto (
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- Users favorite of this poem: Christina8, LIZ, Teddy.15, Bella Shepard
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"martyrs/starters, what a great rhyming pair! Love this rhyme scheme, it is my personal favorite, can be hard to do! But this poem was grand and I love all your poems but this was an extra special story and difficulty level. Awesome!
If my writing ever gets as awesome as your comments I'll be a happy chappy
Can't express my gratitude enough
Many thanks
Magic! "The wink that beckoned me to dance", in a trance! Exquisite, but evil? It's like you go back and forth, while still enjoying the play! A one time experience! Unable to repeat? Love this!!!
So very kind LIZ
A much appreciated review
That kind of evil you just can't escape
Many thanks
Seems we have the same title yet this is truly spellbinding. Kudos my friend 💖
You are beginning to freak me out
Tiger libra spellbound
Your comments inspire
Thanks Teddy
WOW! The imagery of this poem is very powerful, frightening and incredible. Another rhyming masterpiece. I may have nightmares tonight, but it's a fav!
Thank you very much Bella
Extremely grateful for your time and lovely comment
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