Disappointment has set in.
From the start, I’ll begin.
I wanted to attract,
My favorite of birds.
To describe its beauty,
There aren’t enough words.
It loves yellow flowers,
The color red, too.
I’ve thought of everything,
That I could possibly do.
Sweet feeder on the left,
Bright blooms on the right.
A bubbling bird bath,
For it to cool in after flight.
But, I sit here longing,
Sad and forlorn.
No visits to the bird bath.
What am I doing wrong!
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Author:
PoetVids (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 12th, 2023 10:16
- Comment from author about the poem: Hi everyone! Hope your summer is going well. I bought this bubbling bird bath, but no one seem interested! :(
- Category: Nature
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Comments3
Beautiful
Aww .. Thanks Teddy!
Oh such tender dedication to your hummingbird garden-I have planted Egyptian Stars and couple California friendly flower shrubs-the Pomagtanite tree helps too and attracts many little hummingbird guests
Thanks for the kind words, Parisab! I really appreciate it 🙂
Welcome back
Your red glasses have gone
Lovely comeback
I'll do my dr Doolittle impression and send some your way
Delightful to see you
What a wonderful response! I missed you too! You look great as always 🙂 Thank you Peto.
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