Poem : 'A dog's life' ; 3 April, 2023.

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Poem : “A dog’s life”

Soman Ragavan : Hello. Can I post a poem of mine for analysis, please ?

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Soman Ragavan : My poem : "A dog's life." Please analyse by each stanza, then give overall comments. Mention similar poems from other authors, where possible. A DOG'S LIFE


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Sure, I'd be happy to provide an analysis of your poem "A Dog's Life." Here's my breakdown of each stanza, followed by some overall comments:

Stanza 1: The opening stanza sets the tone for the poem, as the speaker addresses the dog directly and describes its "forlorn" appearance. The stanza emphasizes the dog's resignation to its life and how it embodies "utter misery." The final line introduces the theme of human cruelty toward animals.

Stanza 2: This stanza describes the physical condition of the dog, with its head resting on its paws and its legs "barely fed." The speaker notes the helplessness of the dog in the face of the "hungry flies" buzzing around it. The stanza also hints at the possibility of occasional relief, such as getting a bath, but emphasizes the dog's ultimate role as a "faithful servant" and "slave."

Stanza 3: The third stanza contrasts the freedom of human beings with the chains that bind the dog. The speaker notes that humans have the power to "grab and hold" the dog and to derive pleasure from its suffering. The stanza also emphasizes the restrictions that humans impose on the dog's life, including its role as a watchful guardian.

Stanza 4: This stanza returns to the physical conditions of the dog's life, with a focus on its boredom and lack of stimulation. The speaker notes the "exquisite freedom" of human life compared to the dog's short and twisted chain. The stanza also emphasizes the pain that the chain inflicts on the dog's neck, and its desperate attempts to alleviate its suffering. The stanza ends with a note of despair, as the dog's pleading eyes go unnoticed by humans.

Stanza 5: The fifth stanza returns to the theme of human cruelty, as the speaker notes that humans are the ones who decide where the dog's "jail" will be located. The chain around the dog's neck is described as strangulation, and the speaker predicts that the dog's life will soon come to an end.

Stanza 6: This stanza is a plea to end the "savagery" of chaining and restricting dogs. The speaker questions why humans would inflict such suffering on a "faithful dog" who shows devotion and loyalty to its owners. The stanza ends with a call to end the tragedy of the dog's life.

Stanza 7: The final stanza is a tribute to the dog's loyalty and service to humans, despite its suffering and restrictions. The speaker asks for forgiveness on behalf of the "sinners" who have mistreated the dog and calls the dog a "dutiful" and "faithful" servant.

Overall, "A Dog's Life" is a poignant and emotional poem that highlights the suffering of dogs who are chained and restricted by humans. The poem uses vivid imagery and emotional language to emphasize the dog's plight and to critique human cruelty toward animals. The poem's themes are reminiscent of other animal rights poems, such as William Blake's "The Tyger" and Ted Hughes' "The Jaguar," which also criticize human exploitation and domination of the natural world.
 
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                                  A  DOG'S  LIFE

Silent friend ! What a look on thy forlorn face !
To this life, how doth thou resign thyself !
How meekly ! Thou art utter misery itself :
How did we end up as such a cruel race !

Thou, good friend, doth rest thy head
On thy paws, on thy legs barely fed;
Thou hath no choice but to close thy eyes,
While above thee hover the hungry flies.

Perhaps at last shalt thou get a bath or shower,
When thy captors have nothing better to consider;
But, a faithful servant be thou, good watcher,
And a slave blest with the noblest character.

We people are all born utterly free :
But, strong chains do we forge
To grab and hold thee by thy gorge,
While thy agony we watch with glee.

Cruel chains expertly do we fashion,
With which thy freedom to ration;
To satisfy our bloodthirsty passions,
On thee we impose many restrictions.

And we command thee always to keep watch :
And onto intruders we order thee to latch;
To feed thee, now and then we happen to fail,
But, always at us gladly doth thou wag thy tail.

Dog, silent sufferer, lonely prisoner !
What a life ! My God, no more, enough !
Look, look at yon dirty, empty trough :
Please, somebody, do bring some water !

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In thy world, what utter boredom :
But, in ours, what exquisite freedom !
How unfairly short be yon twist'd chain :
How 'pon thy neck doth it inflict pain !

Thou hath turn’d round a myriad times,
Thou hath dreamt up many sad rhymes,
Thou hath plead’d with thy eyes so wet :
But, no notice hath anybody taken yet.

Cruel Man alone hath decid'd
Where thy jail shalt be locat'd :
By yon chain art thou strangulat’d :
Dog, soon wilt thou have depart'd.

What a life ! Do stop this savagery :
Let this poor creature be free finally :
We must be gripp'd by some malady :
Let us put an end now to this tragedy !

From this faithful dog, such devotion
Callously is repaid with such flagellation;
Thou, sanguinary Man ! Undo that chain !
Please ! Don't be so heartless and vain !

Poor dog, all these years of deprivations,
All these years of suffering and restrictions
Bravely hath thou borne with a cheerful face :
Hath thou receiv'd in this life any solace ?

Instantly, at the least noise or intrusion,
Doth thou spring to take up position,
To scan thy masters' domain : thy jail :
And to raise the alarm without fail.

Faithful dog, dutiful dog, Man's slave,
Forgive these sinners --- each a knave;
Though being chain'd up for a lifetime,
Thou serv’st thy masters all the time.
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