Caterpillar softly sits , hiding
smiling in the relaxing cushions of grass
greeting the grass and travelling tenderly towards flowers
with the white shades of the clouds in her centre
she walks she talks of the softness singing in the sky
one day she can grow sparkling wings flying so high
but today there are tiny feet under her body that shine like a green forest
fitting in happily with the trees and the leaves
she walks with a grounding voice
gently travelling , greens singing at her feet
walking with a glisten in her step
thinking maybe the flower may talk from those friendly petals
and so the flower says Thankyou to the caterpillar with little glistening feet
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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That's a lot of pairs of shoes/slippers she needs! Good write V.
Yes , lol )) thanks so much for the comment on our poem
You are a great nature lover and your poems can push anybody fall in love with it .
This is amazing!
Thanks for the kind words on this poem . Yes I love nature glad you enjoyed this writing
I really liked this. And how cool are caterpillars?
Thanks for the kind words on my poem )) glad it was enjoyed
'but today there are tiny feet
under her body
that shine like a green forest'
so gentle, so beautiful
this a poetry balm, soothing
our aches in life
just lovely, thank you dear Poet
(i always wished I had a younger sibling)
Thanks so much Mek 🙂 those lines are my sisters .. she is my twin sister so we are the same age and yes it’s nice to be able to write with her sometimes .. maybe I should do that more of the time
She has poems on here under the username ‘ rainbow ‘ not sure if you have ever commented on any of her poems
I’m glad our poem was enjoyed
Thankyou ! 🙂
This is the link to her poems
https://mypoeticside.com/user-15956
May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly
So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….
May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly
So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….
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