Wish there was a someone,
not just a something
Empty ache spreads,
the cold through my heart
Frozen veins my company
Blames and taunting,
they thought I couldn't hear ; their chatter
Standing behind my closed doors
I couldn't help but listen
Knowing just forty days,
could they ever understand?
Wish I didn't wish to leave'
who understood me, loved me
Isolated, left alone only,
could I ever understand'
'We never realize the value till lost'
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Author:
Aradhya (
Offline) - Published: July 23rd, 2023 06:28
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
Glad you found this platform
No.longer isolated
Their chatter is nothing
Your writing everything
Keep em coming
thank you for the kind words dear poet! so much appreciated
Those emotions
Let them dance on white sheets
Those words sing their melody
Cause your poetry is hitting hard on every line….
Thank you for your encouraging and kind words dear poet!
My comments on the poem "Isolated” by Aradhya
Thank you for accepting my friendship. I have read your poems and Liked them. Those who persecute you are wrong. What goes round comes round. What they started will bound back at them. It was cruel of them to stand near your door to harass you and torture you psychologically. Remember :
---“If you wait by the river long enough, the bodies of your enemies will float by.” >Sun Tzu (544 BC - 496 BC), China : “THE ART OF WAR.”
You have friends on this site. Soman Ragavan. 24 July, 2023. //
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Dear Sonam, I too am glad have accepted your friendship and many many thanks for taking a moment to read my poems and like them. Also thank you for your kind and encouraging words, it truly means a lot. Really grateful the friends like you on this site. Again thank you so much!
The feeling of isolation can be overwhelming. And yet, sometimes in isolation we find reflection, and in reflection we find strengths we never recognized. Very eloquently expressed my friend, and such a great read.
Indeed Bella, how wise your words are! thank you for your kind words my friend
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