Weeping wounds pus and blood
Acid rain brings a flood
Of past memories she tries to repress
She will do what it takes
Script from doc quells the shakes
Covered up by her little black dress
Her love douses the fire
She will always inspire
Any soul in the midst of a fall
Picks them up dusts them down
Queen who won't wear a crown
Looking life in the eye standing tall
Freedom well within grasp
She can discard the mask
She has hidden behind for so long
As her beauty shines through
Heartache slips out of view
She forgives all who did her so wrong
She has dealt with her pain
Grabbed the lion by the mane
It won't stop long enough to re start
Fairy's massage her feet
Cherubs dance to the beat
Of the sound from her angelic heart
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Author:
peto (
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Oh my!!! I love this one! It started really gore, which I appreciate! But, my favorite lines: "Fairy's massage her feet"- mmmmm yes please!!! "Cherubs dance to the beat"--I'm in!!! Beautiful!!!
Thank you very much LIZ
Means a lot coming from one so talented
Truly grateful
Seems she’s found her strength and moved from her past pain
Like how you moved from a few sad lines into positivity
Some lovely words in this .. especially like the last lines with mention of the fairy’s 🙂
Good writing , peto ))
Sounds like she has protection
Thank you Violet
I really appreciate such an in depth review
Very kind and as always
Much appreciated
Your welcome ))
There are parts and pieces of this poem that ring so true for me so I favorited it. Just written with such understanding of your muse, truly a great great poem!
Thank you Christina
For read comment and everything
A true and much valued friend
Extremely grateful as always
Brilliantly written here peto, this is penned with epic tones, and describes a cosmic scene, which is both savage and beautiful.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
Your comments alone are poetic
Thanks very much scribbler
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