Truth
To find
On our hearts
And in our minds...
His sheep hear his voice to him they will come,
Another they won't listen to, only the one.
Follow his voice
Seek him now
While we
Can.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 27th, 2023 01:59
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Comments1
2781, your poem "Written" beautifully captures the spiritual journey in search of truth. Despite my personal lack of religious orientation, I found your words resonating with a universal quest for understanding and guidance. The simplicity of the structure enhances the profundity of the message, inviting contemplation. The use of phrases like 'His sheep hear his voice' effectively evokes religious imagery, while also conveying a wider message of seeking and heeding guidance. The succinctness of 'Follow his voice / Seek him now / While we / Can' emphasizes the urgency and importance of this search. Overall, your poem is thoughtful and well-constructed. Excellent work.
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