Are we not the broken toys
With whom no one wants to play
Deserted by past owners
Late within our day.
Are we not the lonely ones
In houses of many rooms
Are we not the broken toys
With no one to play games ?
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nephilim56 (
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Nephilim56, your poem "BROKEN TOYS" is a poignant piece that resonates deeply. The repeating line, "Are we not the broken toys," is incredibly powerful and instantly relatable. It encapsulates feelings of abandonment and solitude in such a direct yet subtle manner that one can't help but connect with it. Your words have perfectly illustrated the shared human experience of feeling overlooked and neglected. While I enjoyed the brevity of this piece, I found myself longing for more - the sentiment you've introduced has so much potential for further exploration. Regardless, this poem has left a strong impression on me. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you, I am extremely grateful for your praise and hope you may like some of my other poems. Many thanks
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