Silent Seduction

Pop64

Her mind wanders with every pause, every space

Between the lines he writes

She is taken to where she never thought she’d travel

To where fantasy seems a reality

As eyes so affix themselves to the words, the meaning

The heart gets a hold of emotions

It races, increasing, with each word, each syllable

With deep breaths, to this place she returns

The heated midday sun is cool compared to her now

As words transform her quiet day

Into a raging pool of need and want

She so succumbs to the overpowering lust of sensuality

As her discretion is cast aside

Her eyes close upon the very last word read

Her heart and body tremble

As a quake, undeniable to all,

Takes her to the apex of poet’s mountain

And back again

Returning her to her world

And to the next poem to read

  • Author: Michael (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 27th, 2023 08:24
  • Category: Erotic
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ
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  • Jeffrey Weese

    Pop64, "Silent Seduction" is an exquisite exploration of the transformative power of written words and their ability to stir deep, powerful emotions. The poem beautifully encapsulates how literature can transport readers to places they've never been, turning fantasy into perceived reality. I admire the palpable, sensual tension you've built throughout the piece, reflected in the reader's heart racing, breath quickening, and the undeniable quake that takes her to the 'apex of poet’s mountain.' Your poem transcends the boundary between reader and text, highlighting the power of a well-crafted poem to evoke profound emotional responses. Thank you for sharing this stirring, evocative piece.

    • Pop64

      Thank you, I really appreciate detailed reviews and comments on my work.

    • LIZ

      Mmmm yes!! I felt it all!! This is so beautiful! Definitely sent me on a magical trip! This is how I look at poetry. I basically dissect every word, and FEEL them!! Thank you for that!

      • Pop64

        Thank you for your comments and always happy to know that others perceive my words as thos eworth reading, those that can help them escape the bonds of day. - Michael



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