Her mind wanders with every pause, every space
Between the lines he writes
She is taken to where she never thought she’d travel
To where fantasy seems a reality
As eyes so affix themselves to the words, the meaning
The heart gets a hold of emotions
It races, increasing, with each word, each syllable
With deep breaths, to this place she returns
The heated midday sun is cool compared to her now
As words transform her quiet day
Into a raging pool of need and want
She so succumbs to the overpowering lust of sensuality
As her discretion is cast aside
Her eyes close upon the very last word read
Her heart and body tremble
As a quake, undeniable to all,
Takes her to the apex of poet’s mountain
And back again
Returning her to her world
And to the next poem to read
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Pop64, "Silent Seduction" is an exquisite exploration of the transformative power of written words and their ability to stir deep, powerful emotions. The poem beautifully encapsulates how literature can transport readers to places they've never been, turning fantasy into perceived reality. I admire the palpable, sensual tension you've built throughout the piece, reflected in the reader's heart racing, breath quickening, and the undeniable quake that takes her to the 'apex of poet’s mountain.' Your poem transcends the boundary between reader and text, highlighting the power of a well-crafted poem to evoke profound emotional responses. Thank you for sharing this stirring, evocative piece.
Thank you, I really appreciate detailed reviews and comments on my work.
Mmmm yes!! I felt it all!! This is so beautiful! Definitely sent me on a magical trip! This is how I look at poetry. I basically dissect every word, and FEEL them!! Thank you for that!
Thank you for your comments and always happy to know that others perceive my words as thos eworth reading, those that can help them escape the bonds of day. - Michael
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