Blue sits in a house
in waves she speaks
in balance she smiles
a soft sky sings without the birds
blinking blues talk without the shape of a single cloud
and the birds smile elsewhere resting on roofs
taking a break from being with the blues
standing apart
blinking blues without fluffy clouds
and those singing birds
wandering waves without the friendly fishes
a sea a wave or two talking
and other colours seem to be missing somehow
the fish aren’t talking with their fins
their in the distance wandering in another wave
somewhere over there
the boats seem to be on the sand
and here is the blue missing the more today
a wish for the singing birds to settle within
a wish for friendly fish to flap their fins
moving with vibrant colours
allowed to feel more than a sighing feeling and an internal world that feels that little bit empty
blinking blues wish to sit with the birds singing
wandering waves wish to feel friendly fishes flapping their fins
because that’s just about right
makes sense
that sometimes we feel in the wrong place
and something inside of us cannot help but sigh in sad blues
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 30th, 2023 11:27
- Comment from author about the poem: I guess sometimes we can just feel wrong , sad or even empty .. I guess today is one of those days . Tried to write this as my attempt to distract from how I am feeling . Hope you like my poem anyway Like the colour blue
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Yes I felt the blue, such is a wonderful thing that you can share with others makes it better, we all have days like this especially us girls as hormones can sometimes play havoc I hear this very much and you are never alone. 💖
Thanks so much teddy 🙂 it helped a bit to write this . It’s difficult when we feel sad / down
Really appreciate your support
And yeah hormones can affect how we feel too
🌸
Awwww this is beautiful! And yes, we all have those days. It's ok. Let it all out. Kisses for you 😘 💕
Thanks liz 🙂 appreciate the kind words on my poem . Yeah , we do . I guess life can make us sad sometimes
You have used blue in such an artistic way to evoke the feeling of this poem. Beautifully worded dear friend, hope that bright and beautiful blues' are on your horizon.
Thanks for the kind words on my poem , Bella 🙂 I think sometimes we just feel wrong and wish for more . And to me , the sky is nicer with the birds ..
Glad you liked my poem and thanks so much for your support
I always associate blue with sadness
So was good to see the blues tied in to this
Keep em coming Violet
Turned blue to gold
It can be associated with sadness yes .. but I guess there’s other meanings to the colour blue .. like calm , balance .. yesterday I felt kind of calm but also that sadness / or emptiness
It felt nice to write to write this one
Blue can be linked to the throat chakra and expressing yourself / honesty
Thanks for the kind words on my poem ))
wonderful imagery
if blue and jazz music had words
they would read something like
your poem, I think..
thank you! dear Poet
a soothing read
Thanks for the lovely comment on my poem 🙂
I don’t really listen to jazz music but I know it can probably be nice .
Least I was able to write a poem out of my sadness ..
Isn't interesting how the blues can just arrive out of seemingly nowhere. Your lovely poem captured those feelings.
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