Are we knocked out by so many stars
By far go for lust of the full
body moon mythological fate
Being enamored finding a soulmate
To be humored chilled sorbet
Swirls like the sea but the true colors of
the sunset is always upon me
Soft cotton candy beach
Sweet indulgence
Free mind independence
Life is super fabricated
A good healing can never be over rated
Compensated all the flavors if the world
To pick colorful -sunset beat
Animated being swept off our feet
Adonis suits the sunset
She's the seventh sorbet- heaven
Overjoyed by a certain cloud
Moved to her ear but her lips
Got stuck at her sorbet sunset
Both lips and words enchantedly met
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Author:
Sunsetmet (
Offline) - Published: July 31st, 2023 13:16
- Comment from author about the poem: We all love something so many things to do in life go out and enjoy the nature its like the day we were all born you grow apart of something that has true meaning whatever its love- life- music or having ice-cream or sorbet let it meet your sunset. I wanted to put happy thoughts in this writing nice and creamy
- Category: Love
- Views: 6
- User favorite of this poem: Teddy.15.
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Comments5
An incredibly beautiful poem, you are obviously not new to writing. A huge welcome to MPS we are a very friendly bunch. A gorgeous first post full of stunning imagery. 💖
Thanks Teddy I love you comment and you are awesome in writing
A beautiful piece of work complimented by a great photo
Great debut
Welcome
Looking forward to reading more from you
yes indeed, beautiful .. and ink well spilt in my humble opinion .. welcome to MPS .. I Hope you will be happy here ...
All Good Things, Neville 🙂
Thanks Neville all the best to you
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