These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather

Neville

These Words Have Nothing to Do With the Weather

 

Although you

may yet

turn, or indeed,

still run

away and try

to hide

behind the

unfurled folds,

of your

faulty umbrella ..

I hereby

assign a mere

lifetimes

guarantee that

I shall for

always hear,

feel, taste,

smell and see

you smiling ..

Full on, that is

and through

the very many

tangled beards

and veils ..

Those, which

now line

the path on both

sides of this,

your most recent

of sainted

departures ..

And although

I should

not blame you,

for the weather

darling ..

I know that in

all honesty ..

I most surely do

and for

so many other

things, besides ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2023 01:13
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Bella Shepard
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  • Parisab

    The weather seems hazy and a bit shady-yet you still make it the most interesting read, poet friend…

    • Neville


      thank you hugely my friend .. Neville

    • LIZ

      Well, it's the full moon 🌚....it highlights emotions that need healing, and things we need to release!! Happy Wednesday!!!

      • Neville



        indeed, have a brill Wednesday and I aint talkin fish neither ...................... πŸŸπŸŸπŸ πŸŸπŸ’™

        • LIZ

          πŸ˜† not "flatfish", I got you!!! Lol

        • orchidee

          Good write N.
          I say this to KP:' Not now, KP, I've got a headache; or 'Not now, KP, it's raining - though we are indoors!' Any excuse to not...... TMI (Too Much Info) to tell you more! lol.

          • Neville


            absolutely .. save it for the men in white coats .. πŸ‘

          • Teddy.15

            I see an image of a love that once was, peeping in and out again,. I often wonder why people are cruel when it comes to love, I have come somewhat to the conclusion it's pure selfishness with an ugly ego mixed in. lol πŸ’–πŸ€£ sorry to go on dear boy!

            • Neville


              neva a problem .. my absolute pleasure entirely .. ❀️

            • MendedFences27

              Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others live under a cloud. Then, there are the realists, who get snowed, get sunburnt, or carried away on winds of promise.
              This poem, it seems to me, is about a relationship that is on and off, again and again. Perhaps a stormy one, where she brings the rain. Enjoyed it. - phil A.

              • Neville



                it seems you have us weighed up .. gonna start calling you Hawkeye Phil .. thanks a million my friend .. Neville

              • orchidee

                And now some words that do have something to do with the weather - sun, rain, wind, whatever ya fancy! lol.
                It's educational on 'ere, as I've said!

              • Christina8

                Well, I'm smiling! A beautifully penned write! x

                • Neville



                  make my day why don'tcha πŸ’œ

                • Bella Shepard

                  Love is such a tangled web, that if we had the power to lay straight, every strand, would we? It's the unpredictibility that keeps us on our toes, as does the weather. Beautifully crafted and a joy to read dear Nev. Wishing you fair skies!

                  • Neville



                    fair skies always do it for me .. thanks for visiting & for those words of sapience & insight .. Neville

                  • L. B. Mek

                    'feel, taste,
                    smell and see
                    you smiling ..
                    Full on, that is'
                    (reading your pearls of poetic wisdom
                    my cherished friend
                    is like having a conversation
                    with someone who has known us a long time
                    you imbue so much relatable accessibility
                    and versions of a past, we somehow recognise,
                    allowing us to delve deep in your ink and excavate
                    our very own private answers
                    to questions, we would otherwise
                    would still be happy to keep repressed
                    pretending, we didn't know they were there...)
                    thank you!

                    • Neville



                      I dont think they can possibly get much better than that brother Mek .. thank you most kindly ..
                      Neville

                    • Caring dove

                      β€˜ faulty umbrella β€˜ makes me think maybe she hasn’t enough protection around her .. and that perhaps it β€˜ rains on her too much.. she sounds a bit like a sad pained person maybe .. who isn’t in the sun enough lol

                      Great poem interesting words .. πŸ™‚


                      • Neville



                        you are a little ray of sunshine Violet .. bless you & always .. 🌦️πŸŒ₯οΈβ›…πŸŒž



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