The Perfect Painting

Teddy.15

 

Gilded brush

dipped in pure happiness

swept over canvas

sponged over with joy

sprinkled with golden sugar 

softly blown over with a warm smile.

 

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2023 02:15
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 14
  • User favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard.
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Comments8

  • LIZ

    Very nice!! What a picture! Starting my morning with happiness, joy and a big bright smile! Thank you for that!! 💘

    • Teddy.15

      Dearest Liz, that was exactly my goal. Thank you, it's such a pleasure to share with you. 💓

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic T.
      Reminds me of some of Turner's paintings - some seem misty, atmospheric, etc. Not that I'm an art expert - nor a connoisseur - if I knew what a con-wotsit was! lol.

      • Teddy.15

        Oh my Mr O, your thinking cap is truly screwed on this morning lol 🤗

        • orchidee

          Oohh, I'm artistic, appreciating the finer things in life - even the beauty of trouts, but not old ones like KP. lol. I'm trout-mad!

          • 3 more comments

        • Parisab

          You’ve painted another sweet picture! I love that you sound joyous while creating this poem-thanks for the visuals …arte bella

          • Teddy.15

            Awe, thank you dear Parisab so much for your beautiful words, I'm thrilled my personality comes through. 💖

          • Neville



            and perfectly poemed for posterity ❤️

            • Teddy.15

              Have a very Happy day dearest Nev. 💖

            • peto

              If a picture paints a thousand words
              Or 24
              Your words do it justice
              Have a good yin

              • Teddy.15

                Ah, thank you dear Peto, wishing you the best day. 💖

              • MendedFences27

                If pictures could talk, this one would have uttered your words. Made me smile. Loved it. - Phil A.

                • Teddy.15

                  So very proud to know this dear Phil. 💖

                • Bella Shepard

                  Happiness, heaped upon happiness in this poem dear Teddy. My smile just got bigger and bigger with each line. Gorgeous picture to boot.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you so much dear Bella, I'm delighted you have enjoyed this scribbling. ❤️

                  • L. B. Mek

                    within hues of a day's grace
                    I surmise meaning in my worth
                    am I too shades of brightness
                    contained in a pulse of blinding
                    hope
                    (see what you went and done did,
                    inspired me
                    to scribble me feeble poetic reply
                    lol)
                    thank you! wise Poet
                    I read and learn

                    • Teddy.15

                      I got the happy big lol hugs galore my dear friend. 💖



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