The Perfect Painting

Teddy.15

 

Gilded brush

dipped in pure happiness

swept over canvas

sponged over with joy

sprinkled with golden sugar 

softly blown over with a warm smile.

 

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2023 02:15
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard
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  • LIZ

    Very nice!! What a picture! Starting my morning with happiness, joy and a big bright smile! Thank you for that!! πŸ’˜

    • Teddy.15

      Dearest Liz, that was exactly my goal. Thank you, it's such a pleasure to share with you. πŸ’“

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic T.
      Reminds me of some of Turner's paintings - some seem misty, atmospheric, etc. Not that I'm an art expert - nor a connoisseur - if I knew what a con-wotsit was! lol.

      • Teddy.15

        Oh my Mr O, your thinking cap is truly screwed on this morning lol πŸ€—

        • orchidee

          Oohh, I'm artistic, appreciating the finer things in life - even the beauty of trouts, but not old ones like KP. lol. I'm trout-mad!

          • Teddy.15

            lol πŸ’–πŸ€£

            • orchidee

              Oohh, the beauty of trouts, I'm gonna paint 'em - only the ones in the rivers, not human trouts. Eh - human trouts?!

              • Teddy.15

                Well trout's in the river don't talk back maybe just nip your pinky lol

              • Parisab

                You’ve painted another sweet picture! I love that you sound joyous while creating this poem-thanks for the visuals …arte bella

                • Teddy.15

                  Awe, thank you dear Parisab so much for your beautiful words, I'm thrilled my personality comes through. πŸ’–

                • Neville



                  and perfectly poemed for posterity ❀️

                  • Teddy.15

                    Have a very Happy day dearest Nev. πŸ’–

                  • peto

                    If a picture paints a thousand words
                    Or 24
                    Your words do it justice
                    Have a good yin

                    • Teddy.15

                      Ah, thank you dear Peto, wishing you the best day. πŸ’–

                    • MendedFences27

                      If pictures could talk, this one would have uttered your words. Made me smile. Loved it. - Phil A.

                      • Teddy.15

                        So very proud to know this dear Phil. πŸ’–

                      • Bella Shepard

                        Happiness, heaped upon happiness in this poem dear Teddy. My smile just got bigger and bigger with each line. Gorgeous picture to boot.

                        • Teddy.15

                          Thank you so much dear Bella, I'm delighted you have enjoyed this scribbling. ❀️

                        • L. B. Mek

                          within hues of a day's grace
                          I surmise meaning in my worth
                          am I too shades of brightness
                          contained in a pulse of blinding
                          hope
                          (see what you went and done did,
                          inspired me
                          to scribble me feeble poetic reply
                          lol)
                          thank you! wise Poet
                          I read and learn

                          • Teddy.15

                            I got the happy big lol hugs galore my dear friend. πŸ’–



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