A flying horse tipped wings of gold
The greatest story ever told
A dragon's reigns for you to hold
The things I'd love to give you
A week in heaven's private suite
A map to where the pixies meet
A dancing star's majestic beat
The things I'd love to give you
A jet ski to your island beach
A hook to catch what's out of reach
You've learned so much the time to teach
The things I'd love to give you
A shoulder where you rest your fears
Soft lips absorbing salty tears
A hand to hold when darkness near's
The things I'd love to give you
Use fingers to un tug your hair
A platform for your skill and flair
Some respite from the pain you wear
The things my love will give you
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Author:
peto (
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Mmmm and I will gladly reciprocate!!! "You've learned so much the time to teach", yes! Loved it!! ❤️
Aww
Cheers LIZ
A great comment for me to read
Many thanks
Beautiful writing 🙂 really like the words in this poem
Violet
Thank you very much for contined encouragement
I am truly grateful for your support
Your welcome 🙂
What's the price?
Priceless mate
Good retort.
Chivalry in its truest form, in small and grand gestures-Great use of a refrain, a reminder for her ears…
Thank you very much m'lady
The thing I'd love to give you Peto is my applause, a spirited rhymer and such beauty in your lines, are you sure you are not a big softy at heart? lol 💖 I'd gladly take it all.
Lovely thing to say Teddy
I really appreciate such kindness
As for softy
Would normally claim to be but could be misinterpreted
Many thanks for every word sent this way
I love this one
So heart warming
Thank you Laurajayne
Truly appreciate your time to read and comment
Much obliged
This poem has everything, from beautifully rhyming flow, to unbounded love and support. Can't help but love the love here. Extraordinary dear poet!
Can't thank you enough for such a comment Bella
Extremely grateful to you
i tried making this a favorite--computer is acting up. Will try again later. ANYWAY, 'the things my love will give you" simply melts the heart!! "Some respite from the pain you wear",yes please!! You have a gift! And this is just another example of that. Pleasure to read!
Thank you Christina
Your friendship and encouragement are truly valued
Much appreciated
Beautiful write!
Sounds like a true friend, unconditional love and support.
A love we could all hope to experience and give one day.
Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for your continued support
It means so much
Extremely grateful for your time
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