Your cruel way, will eat you alive.
Your cruel way, will keep you up at night.
Your cruel way, will be your punishment.
Your cruel way, will cost you all you've now lost.
Your cruel way, will one day make you sad and lonely.
Your cruel way, will make you regret everything, hang in there love,
It won't be just yet.
Your cruel way, will one day wake you up,
But by then it will all be too late.
Your cruel way, will always make you fall deeper, I'm no longer there to help you up.
Your cruel way, will no doubt turn to anger,
The most fullest pain they is.
And for you cruel ways,
I thank you, for setting me free.
I wouldn't be who I am today if it wasn't
For your cruel way.
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Author:
Laurajayne69 (
Offline) - Published: August 2nd, 2023 09:55
- Comment from author about the poem: I love writing, it's my favourite thing to do. A pen and paper is my best friend.
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Comments4
I get the distinct impression you are both stronger and much better for it ..
I will be Neville, better days are coming I'm sure
Thank you for reading again
................................. good to hear 💛👍
Another "real" read
Full of emotion almost vengeful
Fav line was
"It won't be just yet"
Made me shiver
Thank you Peto
I do try, I'm not the best
But I just love to write.
"I wouldn't be who I am today if it wasn't For your cruel way" is my favorite line!! When we decide to run with the lessons, we grow!! Not the easiest thing to do!
Thank you Liz,
It's true though.
I reflect on just writing.
It's something I enjoy
Thank you again for reading
I can relate to this. Stay strong. Don't give them free rent in your head. Bravo, brilliantly expressed.
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