As the evening sun lays his head
onto sweet sunshine’s bed
the moon she rises up once more
the Stars they twinkle and adorn
a meteor strikes through the sky
lighting up, just for a while
a sight to see and to behold
to see this theatre light unfold
once more the moon, her head will tilt
once more the sun will rise from quilt
and birds will sing and chirp their songs
the day of new to you belongs.
- Author: Teddy.15 ( Offline)
- Published: August 4th, 2023 02:00
- Comment from author about the poem: photo i took on a trip to Madagascar, a 5 am wake up call worth every moment.
- Category: Nature
- Views: 10
- Users favorite of this poem: Caring dove, sorenbarrett
Comments5
A fine write Teddy.
Now me next poem: 'Another day of misery with KP'. lol.
Not that I see her much in person - only in the papers, on TV, etc, etc.
Lmao 🤣 oh orchi chuckle 🤭 I'm going to find you an Italian mamma to cuddle, you'll end up getting your heart broken with KP 😆 💖
Thanks T. lol. Oh why did I marry her? Seh trapped me into it. She hid my water that I put in my gin one Halloween. I was tipsy. It made me say 'yes' to her. lol.
I hope she is still hiding the water lol
Heehee - Ohh, the Day of Old - I gotta say it - Trouts belongs to me. lol.
A new day to enjoy life!! CHOICES! I'm attracted to the moon though! 🌙 I prefer being up at night. Have a great day Teddy!! 💖
Hello dearest Liz, this is about that magical love affair between the sun and the moon never seen together yet both as important lol thank you darling, I adore the moon. 💖
ohhh, paint me jealous what a picturesque view
so happy for you, that must have been ideal
'a sight to see and to behold
to see this theatre light unfold'
and grace our glass lives
peeking out from our rooflights
we embrace our new day
inhaling hope, breath taking flight
Brilliant!
thank you dear Poetess, what a perfect read
to get our weekend started right!
lol
Thank you, Happy weekend dearest Mek, see you round stay safe and sound 💖
sounds, feels and reads like a little bit of heaven .. Madagascar is on my wish list by the way ... ❤️
Oh it's a paradise. Thanks dearest Nev, always a pleasure to have you on my page 💖
Beautiful images portrayed in this poem that merges fantasy and reality into a single shining morning. Lovely my friend
Awe thank you dear sorrenbarret 🌹 I rarely rhyme but this was fun. Thank you dear friend 🌹
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