When Absolutely Gone

Neville

When Absolutely Gone

 

  When I am no more and gone ..

I want to be remembered

for the words I wrote, the deeds

I’ve done and for the love

I gave away and freely shared with

  absolutely everyone ..

 

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  • orchidee

    A fine write N.
    When KP goes, she's gonna be stuffed as a trout on my mantlepiece - taxidermy. lol.

    • Neville



      grate, but forget taxidermy Mr. O, uber thought you had your own mantlepiece in the first place

    • LIZ

      "For the love I gave away freely" YES!! I want to be remembered by the love we shared, and the way we made each other feel (hopefully incredible)!! 💜

      • Neville



        Thank you, what more could one possibly ask or want .. 💜

      • Christina8

        You make everyone you come in contact with feel incredible! You will certainly have that legacy...x

        • Neville



          aww gosh, now you gone and made me blush purple 💜x

        • MendedFences27

          I'm feeling philosophical this morning and can't help but say (there will be opinions expressed on this) that love always comes with a price. Sometimes it's painful, sometimes bittersweet, and sometimes happiness, but always a price. The pain of separation, the bittersweetness of a temporary state of bliss followed by a breakup, or the happiness where he gives his love and she does likewise, a trade if you will, but nevertheless, a price.
          OK, so I guess your poem struck a chord with me. Maybe we all seek the same thing. Well, needless to say I enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.

          • Neville



            For a moment then, I thought you were pulling my leg Phil O So Fickle .. Cheer Phil n truly .. Neville

          • Teddy.15

            Perfect! 💖

            • Neville



              Bless U ❤️

            • Doggerel Dave

              My record card is so mixed better it was shredded and the world move on.....

              • Neville



                Oh' well, some have all the luck ..

              • L. B. Mek

                to some of us
                you're remembered and cherished
                for all these things
                even as you live and breathe..
                may you never change Hyung
                thank you! for being you
                dear Poet supreme

                • Neville



                  well I'll be blowed and eat my hat simultaneously sir .................... cheers brother M .. N



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