Worn Out Shoes

Teddy.15

 

She was a daydreamer

one who actually lived out her fantasies

her charm would have bowled anyone over

a mind of pure genius

anything could have sparked a poem

if she’d just let her imagination steer

she could have written a thousand books

maybe she did?

but her greatest love

was to dance every night

until the break of dawn with Mr Bojangles.       

 

        

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2023 03:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: My very own interpretation of an artist gone far too soon ❤️
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 24
  • Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard, L. B. Mek
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  • orchidee

    Yep, KP goes out on nightly dances with Mr B. lol.

    • Teddy.15

      🤣 She couldn't dance with what she has around her

    • Neville


      put on those red shoes and dance .. I just wanna watch you sway .. no touchin .. but this mistress T is very touching indeed ... Neville ❤️

      • Teddy.15

        Awe my dear Nev, I love dancing, this was a very subtle shout out to Sinead O'Connor today, such a waste of talent ❤️

      • LIZ

        Ahhhh I actually consider myself a daydreamer. I do let my imagination run wherever she wants, but I know how to ground her again! 😉 AND Mr. Bojangles....what a song!! Heard it a LONG time ago. Brings back memories. 💛

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you sweet Liz, I hope your memories are lovely, I'm a daydreamer too, that's why we can write 💖

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Daydreamers all
          awaiting Charon's call

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you so much dear Jerry. 💖

          • Sunsetmet

            I remember the song Mr Bojangles
            very well written thanks Teddy

            • Teddy.15

              Awe this was a pleasure. Thank you so much dear Sunsetmet 💖

            • Bella Shepard

              Ah, this one is a beauty! I can hear "Mr. Bojangles" playing in the background, and see the daydreamer lost in her reverie. Thank you for such a happy thought dear friend.

              • Teddy.15

                Awe you are so welcome my dear Bella, thank you for coming by and leaving such kind words ❤️

              • sorenbarrett

                There is something about dancing that involves the whole body and soul, more expressive than song, it is a wonderful art and Mr. Bojangles is the right song for it. Daydreaming converted to dance how better to be oneself.

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you dear Sorenbarret 🤗❤️

                • peto

                  Excellent as per
                  Enjoyed the twirl
                  The repeat of" Was" rather than "is"
                  Tinged the sadness involved
                  An emotional dance

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you dear Peto ❤️

                  • L. B. Mek

                    she chose right!
                    just lovely dear Poetess

                    • Teddy.15

                      Why, thank you lovely Mek. 💖



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