For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Now you are here
we just can't
take our eyes of you ..
Yes you, and your
big baby blue eyes ..
Hey, just look at
those hands of hers
too tiny, to catch
hold of his fat thumb ..
She sounds
like a puppy, while
he stands there
on guard, beside her
just gazing down
and happily,
beating his drum ..
For she,
there is no doubt
at all, is loved,
perfect and beautiful
all neatly
rolled into one ..
It was then, that he
cried through his
whiskers
and he whispered ..
I shall be brave for you
Astrid,
my dear Astrid Wren ..
Just for you,
my little bird, I shall
forever be wise
and always, be strong ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Lovely writing ) so nicely expressed . 🙂
thank you Violet .. Astrid Wren is my new Granddaughter .. Neville
Yeah , I thought so 🙂
That has to be nice
Good write N.
I say' Hi, Astrid, erm, KP!' Not really. lol
Me two cats cry through their whiskers when they see her. They are scared of trouts. lol.
maybe they are not cats but figments of your imagination .. 🐀🐈⬛🐈⬛
Or are they half cats, half guinea pigs?
Awww so beautiful! And Astrid Wren is such a pretty name!!! Congrats!!! 💜
Thank you LIZ .. I am very proud of my daughter for the gift of my first grand child Astrid Wren .. She is so new and I can not possibly describe the feeling when I hold her .. Neville 🤍
So very touching, it's unconditional love, and it's just what you deserve, every day Astrid will grow and in a couple of months she will start giggling, that's when I fear I shall lose my poetry friend lol , Nev you just can't get enough of a new born I know I've spent my life looking after them, so many stages and it's always different when we are a family member looking in as we can have all the fun and then go home! Even though knowing you it's hard too leave each day 🤗 enjoy this marvelous moment as you already know how fast they grow up. I know you are without doubt the best popps she could ever have. 💖
You are mighty kind Teddy .. thanking you is such a conditioned reflex .. I near placed a ❤️ before I had read you through .. ❤️so now you got two ... Neville
The more the merrier lol ❤️💖💖🤣💕💖
That was a very touching write for your new granddaughter. Cannot congratulate you enough, dear friend!
many thanks indeed C .. N 🙂
This is so beautifully and lovingly written, it would be impossible not to shed a tear of joy for you, which I happily did. God bless Astrid Wren, I know there will be no shortage of love for this little one. Enjoy every moment of being that proud Grandpa. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful event. Take care my friend.
A review to treasure .. Many thanks Bella .. Take care too my friend .. Neville
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather, gazing at your star’s big baby blue eyes. Thank you for these moving words!
Many thanks Parisab .. I am presently wearing a big smile 🙂
i'm smiling all teeth
my heart opened wide
what a delight
to share in a cherished friends
success..
you must be so proud Hyung
🍻
I simply can not describe my friend .. thanks for noticing ..
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