The words she sent my way today
Took much more than my breath away
I miss her style the slow reveal
The way her presence makes me feel
I miss the beats my heart would skip
The way my name forms on her lip
Her courage in the darkest days
The way she laughs and how she plays
Unbreakable this unique bond
A brand new day has finally dawned
And should she look she'll surely find
My heart has found one of a kind
- Author: peto ( Offline)
- Published: August 9th, 2023 09:12
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 19
- Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, Bella Shepard, Christina8
Comments6
Wow!!! I love this one!!! This type of
connection is rare! Cherish it!
One can but try Liz
Thanks very much for such a kind review
Such a beautiful write!
The love and deep feelings for this person is felt and well expressed through your words.
Thanks for sharing!
No point sharing if no one reads
My thanks to you
Much appreciated
Everything seems to happen when it's meant to not always when we wish it. Divine timing or right timing everything happens in it's own timing - as it's meant to be.. at least that's what I believe.
I hope that it works out for you in the most serendipitous way!
Beautiful
Thank you very much Holly
I just smiled all the way through this beautiful poem of love and pure rapture. Lucky the "Miss", and lucky the fellow who treasures a gift such as this. Superb!
Bella
Your comments sing and inspire almost as much as your poetry
Always a joy to read
Truly grateful for such support
An absolutely beautiful poem, Stevie! Sorry I didn't see this sooner. Just stunning! Your connection with this person is well versed, great job!
Thank you Christina
Lovely comment just before bed
Much appreciate as always
Extremely grateful
What made this poem special and different, that you are absorbed by her speech, how she forms words, or how she calls your name. Authentic expression in words put together with patience and sincerity. Great write!
So perspective
A different accent from myself
Visible even when she writes
Thank you for this
In depth and spot on
Very grateful for such attention
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