Miss

peto

The words she sent my way today 

Took much more than my breath away 

I miss her style the slow reveal 

The way her presence makes me feel 

 

I miss the beats my heart would skip 

The way my name forms on her lip

Her courage in the darkest days 

The way she laughs and how she plays 

 

Unbreakable this unique bond 

A brand new day has finally dawned 

And should she look she'll surely find 

My heart has found one of a kind

 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 9th, 2023 09:12
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, Bella Shepard, Christina8.
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Comments6

  • LIZ

    Wow!!! I love this one!!! This type of
    connection is rare! Cherish it!

    • peto

      One can but try Liz
      Thanks very much for such a kind review

    • Introverted Sage

      Such a beautiful write!
      The love and deep feelings for this person is felt and well expressed through your words.
      Thanks for sharing!

      • peto

        No point sharing if no one reads
        My thanks to you
        Much appreciated

        • Introverted Sage

          Everything seems to happen when it's meant to not always when we wish it. Divine timing or right timing everything happens in it's own timing - as it's meant to be.. at least that's what I believe.
          I hope that it works out for you in the most serendipitous way!

        • hollyv88

          Beautiful

          • peto

            Thank you very much Holly

          • Bella Shepard

            I just smiled all the way through this beautiful poem of love and pure rapture. Lucky the "Miss", and lucky the fellow who treasures a gift such as this. Superb!

            • peto

              Bella
              Your comments sing and inspire almost as much as your poetry
              Always a joy to read
              Truly grateful for such support

            • Christina8

              An absolutely beautiful poem, Stevie! Sorry I didn't see this sooner. Just stunning! Your connection with this person is well versed, great job!

              • peto

                Thank you Christina
                Lovely comment just before bed
                Much appreciate as always
                Extremely grateful

              • Parisab

                What made this poem special and different, that you are absorbed by her speech, how she forms words, or how she calls your name. Authentic expression in words put together with patience and sincerity. Great write!

                • peto

                  So perspective
                  A different accent from myself
                  Visible even when she writes
                  Thank you for this
                  In depth and spot on
                  Very grateful for such attention



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