It was a hot humid night
But our skin burned hotter still
A taste of liquid fire on your lips
Ignited a flame I couldn’t kill
Sweaty bodies tangled in the night's embrace
Drops from our essence forever mixed
Joining two souls across time and space
With a bond that can’t be forgotten
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a Beautiful read
especially like how there's no preamble
your lines dive straight in and never surfaced
till you painted your vividly succinct scene..
thank you for sharing, dear poet
what a great showcasing of your wonderful talent
Thank you. Your encouragement is very much appreciated. I struggle because by nature I am very precise with my words. I feel like I am not creative when comparing myself to others who have the ability, the gift to have beautiful words flow.
be kind to yourself dear poet
only compare yourself, to yourself
we all use the same words
but no one else can tell our truth
let that be enough
and enjoy the ride!
(don't i sound so pretentious) lol
forgive me
Nice memory.
It is. Thank you!
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