a video
You’re like a video
Glistening in a Lambo
Clip to Clip
Close up kisses
You lip sync to your musical hero
Moving your body to silence
Mise-on-Scene
You leave as fast as you show
In your Fashion, good taste, bad form
looking all cute
You leave after three minutes
Acting all tough
Reminding me you are gone
Like my passion for the show,
you must go on and be gone
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Author:
Parisab (
Offline) - Published: August 9th, 2023 19:27
- Comment from author about the poem: My love for the music video never ends!
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Comments7
I had to rewind and play again
1st read had me imagine you singing in the mirror with hairbrush as a microphone
Now see it more as an MTV' moment
Or a metaphor for a 3 minute wonder
Will be reading yet again
Probably reading too much into it
But I love that my interpretation has so many options
Long story short
Thoroughly enjoyed
My intention was to grab your attention in a three minute clip, and leave you to your literary imagination! Thank you for watching, Peto…
Expertly done
so many options to choose from one is literarily spooled for choice .. Neville
Then, Fin! I am so pleased that you found the video engaging, Neville…
some music videos stay with you throughout life
but we can never recreate that first viewing feel..
(a quirky write, love the free spirit energy and uniquely inventive style)
thank you, dear Poet
Thank you for viewing and noticing my instinct for inventive styling, at your first view, poet peer…
Wonderfully unique 💖
I thank you!
I love the way you use assonance and alliteration in this poem. Great job.
I already appreciate your attention to detail and am looking forward to more exchanges…
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