A songbird flapping lost it's tune
Anarchic tides ignore the moon
Tries cooking up without a spoon
His solid tears of ice
A mountain top without a peak
A linguist struggling to speak
Sad eyes have sprung constant leak
His solid tears of ice
The winds of change remain the same
He'll find someone to take the blame
An architect his house of shame
His solid tears of ice
A broken unforgiving heart
A horse lagging behind the cart
Another race lost at the start
His solid tears of ice
Her touch brought warmth to frozen skin
A tonic mixed with bitter gin
His resurrected toothless grin
She melts his tears of ice
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Author:
peto (
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I guess what ever our talents, it's very rare to be truly noticed, on those rare times we are the feeling is emmence pride. Such beauty in your lines dear Peto. 💖
And such kindness in your words Teddy
Thank you so very much
Some beautiful words in this I liked reading your poem 🙂
So much in your writing .. speaks to me of how sometimes things are just wrong and not the way their meant to be .. there’s something missing which should be there
‘ A mountain top without a peak
A linguist struggling to speak ‘
A good writing ..
You have got me sussed Violet
Always seems to be something missing
I really do appreciate such an understanding comment
Thank you very much
So the ‘toothless grinned’ man did not meet the same faith as your ‘songbird’ You created the icy environment consistently and succinctly! I may even sip on a tonic and ‘bitter’ gin to your health and to a fine write!
Aww Cheers parisa
Bottoms up
Extremely grateful for your input
Always a joy to see
Many thanks
Aww Cheers parisa
Bottoms up
Extremely grateful for your input
Always a joy to see
Many thanks
Again, I think this is your best and you go and write another! "she melts his tears of ice"---must be a special woman! A wonderful, wonderful work of art dear stevie! x
Your comments are so inspiring Christina
Extremely grateful to you
Truly appreciate every word you send this way
Thank you x
Lovely written poem how it melts to the ice but the warmth comes through the lovely skin Thanks
Lovely comment
Really appreciate your time sunset
Many thanks
Yes have a nice day
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