no dad

vividvoid14

my dad never cared

He left when i was young and i feared i was the reason why.

but as time passed by that's when i realized.

i'm not the one to blame, and he should be the one ashamed

for leaving never taking the lead. He is deceiving.

he only ever lied to me. manipulated me.

now four-teen i wont lean into he traps

your cap.

i wont be like him

i wont do bad

ill be a dad

ill make my kids laugh

ill teach them

ill discipline them

ill show them to be better than i am

my dad never helped but he is my new source of inspiration

i'm demented now and i'll use all my determination

and every one without a dad boy or girl don't give up please take this poem and use it to become determined to become the best version of you. and i promise you will make it

 

 

  • Author: nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 10th, 2023 09:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: Even if you dont have a dad u can still make it i promise you, take me for example im only fourteen and i run my own businesses
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Parisab

    You are a dream fourteen year old boy and a young man we should be all proud of! You rose above and you are a shining star! I feel sorry for any parent who misses out on a gift (for any reason.) Good poem and enjoy your business…

    • vividvoid14

      thank you so much
      i appreciate the kind words

    • mudraa

      more power to you dude..keep writingg

    • evenwheniLie

      Poems should have meaning, or at least a meaningful intent, you hit this one out the ballpark… this poem should be the poster child for deadbeat dads and the sons they leave behind…. Excellent



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