A Moment of Enlightenment

Neville

A Moment of Enlightenment

 

After spending

almost

forty years,

staring

at the same old

stone wall,

waiting for

enlightenment ..

Suddenly it

dawned on him ..

He had been

well and truly

zenned ..

A long time ago ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 11th, 2023 00:49
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    I'm omm'ed and ahh'ed over this - then said - Good write N.

    • Neville


      ............................... thank you kindly Steven .. 🌞

    • Doggerel Dave

      Better late than never....I found Zen fun when I nibbled at it many moons ago, but moved on fairly quickly (probably says more about me than Zen...no not probably....)

      • Neville



        ................................. maybe perhaps tho' πŸ€πŸ‘

      • Teddy.15

        LOL ah but now the wall has come down. πŸ€— 🀣 πŸ’–

        • Neville



          thanks for reminding me .. I was wondering why I seemed to be staring into nothing ❀️

        • LIZ

          Well, I do believe sometimes you have to sit still in order to create that state of consciousness, and start being guided by intuition. BUT, NOT 40 YEARS. LOL 🀣 Although it certainly feels that way. When that moment of enlightment happens, all bets are off. No wall means you can now create whatever you want. That's just how I look at it. Nice piece! πŸ’œ

          • Neville



            The fact you have clearly thought about your response to my little scribble has made the whole thing worthwhile .. Thank you LIZ πŸ’œ

            • LIZ

              Awwwww that went straight to my heart!! πŸ’œ

            • Sunsetmet

              This enlightened me with simplicity smile of lifted gravity Thanks so much

              • Neville



                How very kind .. thank you 🌞setmet πŸ™‚πŸ‘

              • L. B. Mek

                lol
                zen in, zen out
                karate kid's got nothing
                on a poet, sincere
                (thanks for the chuckle)

                • Neville



                  like we used to say in the Royal air force .. chucks away our kid .......... πŸ‘



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