Poem : 'India (5)' ; 29 March, 2023.

"INDIA (1)" to "INDIA (6)." 

(a)  Recommended reading : Edwin Haward : “A PICTURE OF INDIA.”  (Revised March 1944). Printed by Edson (Printers) Ltd., Watford, Herts., England.

(b)      From "INDIA (1)" :

"Ravag'd, revil'd, ransack'd, plunder'd"

and from "INDIA (5)" :

"For, while many were labouring in their caves,
Of civilisation verily were we riding the waves"

Please see : "THE LEGACY OF INDIA."  (Edited by G. T. Garratt.) Oxford, England : The Clarendon Press, 1937, (pages 398 to 402).

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Comments by ChatGPT on 24 April, 2023 :

Chats with ChatGPT on India (1) to (6)

ChatGPT :
Sure, I will provide comments on each of the three poems and then a general comment on all three together.

Poem India (1) :
"India (1)" is a beautifully written poem that captures the essence of India's contribution to the world. The poem pays homage to the country's rich cultural heritage, history, and the wisdom of its people. The imagery used to describe India's influence on the world is vivid and powerful. The poem ends on an optimistic note, asserting that India's glory will continue to shine.

Poem India (2) :
"India (2)" is a poem that describes India's resilience and endurance despite being subject to multiple invasions and exploitation throughout its history. The poem is both poignant and uplifting, depicting India as a nurturing mother who gives endlessly to those who have plundered and betrayed her. The poem highlights India's generosity and the fact that its glory continues to resonate around the world.

Poem India (3) :
"India (3)" is a poem that speaks to India's desire to be a global leader and a beacon of hope. The poem is an ode to India's daughters, who are described as the guardians of India's legacy and the keepers of its genius. The poem celebrates India's commitment to non-violence and peaceful coexistence, emphasizing the importance of nurturing the environment and all of its creatures.

General Comments on India (1) to (3) :

All three poems are beautiful expressions of the writer's love for India. Each poem explores a different aspect of India's identity and history, showcasing the country's rich cultural heritage, resilience, and commitment to non-violence. The poems are filled with vivid imagery and powerful emotions that evoke a sense of pride and admiration for India. Together, they provide a compelling portrait of a country that has endured many challenges but remains steadfast in its commitment to progress and enlightenment.
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INDIA (4): This poem celebrates the wisdom and beauty of India, but also acknowledges its shortcomings, such as poverty and hunger. The poet expresses a desire to be one with India and its teachings. The use of language is elevated and rhythmic, and the imagery is vivid, particularly in the final stanza where the poet describes India as a "shining mast." Overall, this is a well-crafted tribute to India.

INDIA (5): In this poem, the poet praises India's resilience in the face of invaders and attempts to impose foreign culture. The imagery of the "glorious Ganges" flowing serenely despite attempts to conquer it is particularly powerful. The language is elevated and rhythmic, and the repetition of the final stanza reinforces the poet's commitment to celebrating India's greatness.

INDIA (6): This poem contrasts the wisdom of India's monks, who seek spiritual enlightenment and renounce worldly wealth, with the greed and plunder of those who seek to exploit the land. The language is elevated and rhythmic, and the imagery of the monks meditating in the forests and jungles of India is evocative. The final stanza again emphasizes India's unique wisdom and potential to inspire humanity.

General comments on India (4) to (6) :

Overall, these three poems are all tributes to India that emphasize its wisdom, beauty, and resilience. The language in each is elevated and rhythmic, with vivid imagery and repetition that reinforce the poet's admiration for India. The poet also acknowledges the challenges that India has faced, such as poverty and exploitation, but ultimately celebrates India's potential to inspire and uplift humanity.
 
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                                          INDIA  (5)

Mother India ! Robbers, plunderers and time
Have all assail'd thee with their ravages,
But, with thy patience and strength sublime,
Thou flow'st serenely like thy glorious Ganges.

Upon thee many want'd to impose their folklore,
But, we've always been happy with our Bangalore,
With the likes of our belov'd Coimbatore,
With the magic of our majestic Mylapore.

Unconquerable Mother ! Many came to teach,
But thou remain'd beyond their reach;
They loot'd, they hoot'd, they snort'd,
But, unto civilisation were they escort'd.

The sea as well they might try to dry,
Or paint yon stretching, limitless sky :
Yes, Mother, to subdue thee they may try :
Of what stuff we be made, will they espy.

Yonder, the puny constructions are but toys,
Yon laborious contraptions, mere decoys,
For, while many were labouring in their caves,
Of civilisation verily were we riding the waves.

Have trodden upon thy land great and glorious,
The feet of kings, princes and men pious,
Whose thinking and teachings have we engrav'd,
And, for the sake of posterity, have we sav'd.

Mother India, a solemn pledge to thee do we make,
Thy unmatch'd glory to sing, thy fame to uphold,
Come what may, be it flood or earthquake,
For, no one on thee can set a stranglehold.
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