Why no efforts to understand?
Why no patience to listen?
Why those degrading remarks?
Why that looking down upon?
Why the disgust in your eyes?
And, why imposing your commands?
Why them others?
Is that because they are complex
or because they speak?
Is that because they argue
or because they refuse…
Your thoughts
your rule or just
You…
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Author:
L.F (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sociopolitical
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Comments2
So many questions
Beautifully written
The killer ending I believe is the most important
Thought provoking pleasure
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm thrilled to hear that you found the writing beautifully done and the ending impactful. It's wonderful to know that the piece sparked questions and offered a thought-provoking experience.
Thats a good way of putting things into context nicely written thanks
You're very welcome!
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