Deeping in the signs below.
This feeling just won't seem to fade
Captured
triggered
involved
Below the fear lies, take me away.
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Author:
Dacy Pastro (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 16th, 2023 00:40
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Comments1
This sounds scary, frightening, suicidal., or I completely missed the point. Otherwise, well written. The structure implies a descension. " Captured, triggered, involved" is what led me to conclude my initial response, and "take me away" only added to it. All in all, a very good poem. I liked it, but the theme scared me. - Phil A.
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