Deeping in the signs below.

This feeling just won't seem to fade




Below the fear lies, take me away.

  • Author: Dacy Pastro (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2023 00:40
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • MendedFences27

    This sounds scary, frightening, suicidal., or I completely missed the point. Otherwise, well written. The structure implies a descension. " Captured, triggered, involved" is what led me to conclude my initial response, and "take me away" only added to it. All in all, a very good poem. I liked it, but the theme scared me. - Phil A.

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