Every action is inscribed on the invisible walls of time
manifesting in the mind as memories,
determining the quality of life we lead.
Albeit we cannot erase what is already written,
we can improve the quality of our message
on the pages that yet remain
with every thought that manifests as deeds;
God willing we will each have an epic end yet.
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Author:
FOKVS (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 24th, 2023 02:58
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
This is the end I've reached, of your fine poem K!
heheh
Thank you for taking the time to read, I reaaly appreciate it!
While so much is truly inscribed in stone, we have opportunity, by choice to change the tense. Putting things in the past or yet to be. Very thought provoking write.
Thank you Pop64,
Really appreciate the positive and insightful feedback!
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