Sun's Rise (Pantoum style)

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When cometh the sun upon the mornings dew

The birds will chirp in harmonious pure delight

As it raises and casts shadow then on the earth

We welcome the dawn so to let go of the night

 

 

The birds will chirp in harmonious pure delight

Serenading us as we share in a morning’s kiss

We welcome the dawn so to let go of the night

We recognize it well for its beauty and its bliss

 

 

Serenading us as we share in a morning’s kiss

We delight in the sounds that play for us two

We recognize it well for its beauty and its bliss

As we welcome each other as we so often do

 

 

We delight in the sounds that play for us two

While we take each other into a tight embrace

As we welcome each other as we so often do

I kiss you tenderly as I stare into your face

 

 

While we take each other into a tight embrace

The sun tilts its head, blushing from the view

I kiss you tenderly as I stare into your face

As the sun rises, I shall make love with you

 

 

The sun tilts its head, blushing from the view

As it raises and casts shadow then on the earth

As the sun rises, I shall make love with you

When cometh the sun upon the mornings dew

  • Author: Michael (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 28th, 2023 07:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: The pantoum is a poem of any length, composed of four-line stanzas in which the second and fourth lines of each stanza serve as the first and third lines of the next stanza. The last line of a pantoum is often the same as the first.
  • Category: Nature
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Comments1

  • LIZ

    I don't often come across this type of poetry. It's beautiful!! AND, I'm more of a night person, but I still appreciate a beautiful sunrise! 🌞



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