Bang Goes Another Theory
There is something electromagtastic
about the old dust
collecting on new computer screens ..
There is something
about the destruction found in re-birth
and the proceeds of
artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..
There is something
in all of the aps and the ampules that we
now find discarded
and littering our almost everywheres ..
I so hope you can feel
the enormity and asceticism of what I mean ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: there are no spelling errors here wotsoever 🤍
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It's OK for some with their ampules - can ya beat them?
I'm talking utter nonsense - no change there then, 99% of the time! lol.
Don't keep underestimating yourself like that Mr O 😎👍
Oh, I'm un-cultured - I don't get the meaning of half of the poems on here. lol.
Yes, I do get the magnitude of it, and how much discipline it takes. As always, your title is killer!! Nice!💜
I'm not usually one for titles, but now that you mention it, thank you Princess .. 💜
💜💜💜💜
Hope springs eternal......so it just can continue to.......
Yep - no doubt about it....I've checked again.....
something tells me you are gonna look just like a kilt before too long .. 🤍
Kilt? it ain't getting no better....
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You evoke in this poem a feeling I struggle to put into words, unsettling and worthy of contemplation. We constantly hunger for more, but never truly know what that might be. It leaves an empty feeling amidst all that we discard. I may be way off, but I so loved the mental exercise. This poem leaves me right on the cusp of a thought....... This is superb!
As far as I am concerned .. that feels like a serious win win to me .. many thanks Bella .. Neville
'Wish Bella had come to the party earlier....thanks Bella....
...and I'll be sending the kilt to Oxfam...
and there is something
about seedless grapes
and Bill Gates
buying-up all the farms
then producing
commercial meat in laboratories...
yes, dear wise Poet
'There is something electromagtastic,'
'about the destruction found in re-birth
and the proceeds of
artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..'
and sadly, very few like me
will ever truly comprehend
' the enormity and asceticism' of these most haunting foreshadowing
of our collective society's projection
upon a path of irreversible demise...
......................................................... snap, but with much appreciation bro ..
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