Bang Goes Another Theory

Neville

Bang Goes Another Theory

 

There is something electromagtastic

about the old dust

    collecting on new computer screens ..

There is something

about the destruction found in re-birth

and the proceeds of

    artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..

There is something

in all of the aps and the ampules that we

now find discarded

  and littering our almost everywheres ..

I so hope you can feel

  the enormity and asceticism of what I mean ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 29th, 2023 01:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: there are no spelling errors here wotsoever 🤍
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 12
  • Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard, L. B. Mek
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  • orchidee

    It's OK for some with their ampules - can ya beat them?
    I'm talking utter nonsense - no change there then, 99% of the time! lol.

    • Neville


      Don't keep underestimating yourself like that Mr O 😎👍

      • orchidee

        Oh, I'm un-cultured - I don't get the meaning of half of the poems on here. lol.

      • LIZ

        Yes, I do get the magnitude of it, and how much discipline it takes. As always, your title is killer!! Nice!💜

        • Neville



          I'm not usually one for titles, but now that you mention it, thank you Princess .. 💜

        • LIZ

          💜💜💜💜

        • Doggerel Dave

          Hope springs eternal......so it just can continue to.......

          Yep - no doubt about it....I've checked again.....

          • Neville



            something tells me you are gonna look just like a kilt before too long .. 🤍

            • Doggerel Dave

              Kilt? it ain't getting no better....

              • Neville


                checked + tartan = kilt ......... maybe 😎

              • Bella Shepard

                You evoke in this poem a feeling I struggle to put into words, unsettling and worthy of contemplation. We constantly hunger for more, but never truly know what that might be. It leaves an empty feeling amidst all that we discard. I may be way off, but I so loved the mental exercise. This poem leaves me right on the cusp of a thought....... This is superb!

                • Neville



                  As far as I am concerned .. that feels like a serious win win to me .. many thanks Bella .. Neville

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    'Wish Bella had come to the party earlier....thanks Bella....

                    ...and I'll be sending the kilt to Oxfam...

                  • L. B. Mek

                    and there is something
                    about seedless grapes
                    and Bill Gates
                    buying-up all the farms
                    then producing
                    commercial meat in laboratories...
                    yes, dear wise Poet
                    'There is something electromagtastic,'
                    'about the destruction found in re-birth

                    and the proceeds of

                    artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..'
                    and sadly, very few like me
                    will ever truly comprehend
                    ' the enormity and asceticism' of these most haunting foreshadowing
                    of our collective society's projection
                    upon a path of irreversible demise...

                    • Neville



                      ......................................................... snap, but with much appreciation bro ..



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