Have you ever felt
The overwhelming feeling
Of simply being
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Author:
Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes it hit me full force!
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I be - or I not be? That is the question!
It's cultured on 'ere, ya know - bit of Shakespeare there, a little mis-quoted! lol.
I'm impressed Orchi, nice try. Somehow I always knew that deep down inside you were highbrow. Have a good one my friend!
Shakey also wrote some rubbish in places, I think! lol. That's about one of about three quotes I know from him. heehee.
Being...still...present? Yes! 🩷
Thank you my friend, it's breathtaking when it comes along.
Are we human beings
Or human becoming
Short sharp and thought provoking
You pose the question of the ages. Thank you my friend for reading and enlightening comment!
Only those lucky enough can say yes. And yes! it's an amazing feeling to just be, be still, be a part of everything, finding symbiosis. Terrific haiku!
Thank you so much for commenting. It is an amazing feeling, and it can come in the simplest way, when you least expect it.
ever so and often .. but not so much these daze .. till now & it hit me too, yet so very tenderly .. 💛
You bring a smile to my face dear friend. Those moments are so very special, and so lovely to share. As we said in the sixties "Peace & Love" dear Nev!
Yes - comes when suddenly aware that sometime I won't be, but right now I am.
(not a bad or sad feeling).
Isn't it wonderful when it does come, and so glad you are in the zone right now. I wish we could bottle it. Take care dear Dave!
Though I know two or three of Shakey's quotes - 'Hamlet' is quite 'quote-y', if that's even a word?! lol.
I actually think that is a word, or should be. You're right about Hamlet, just wish things had turned out better for him. But then that's Shakey. Take care dear Orchi!
I quoth Shakey - not always accurately! lol.
crazy how in-sync two strangers can be
"Sometimes, as I drift idly on
Walden Pond,
I cease to live and begin, to be.”
lol
so surreal this journey guided by Poesy's ink
Your comment in itself is worthy of Poesy's ink. Thank you so much for being you!
More than I would like to admit 🙂
It is a strangeness hard to define. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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